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  • Poetry » Teen Fiction, Humor Re: Youth's explanation for over speeding!

    Hey there, Muskan. I have to warn you: this is going to be harsh, but bear with me. I want to help you. Let's get started with three suggestions. (1) ...

    Aug 30, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Cat

    Hey there, Mystical! I'm back with a short review. Today I've got three small nitpicks for you. Ready? 1. Meowling loudly when hungry Not sure if someone brought this up, ...

    Aug 30, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Rush

    Hey, Mystical! I just want to talk about one thing in this review: the personification of time. Lots of writers personify time, to the point where your personification and ideas ...

    Aug 30, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: House of Haiku #2

    Hey there, Mystical. Here again to put my two cents in. Let's get started. Cake: I won't be looking at this one in depth because I didn't feel it was ...

    Aug 30, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Lyrical Re: House of Haiku

    Hey there, Mystical. Here's my two cents on your two awesome haikus. First of all, excellent first attempt. Let's look at the first one. Sun: This is a strong first ...

    Aug 30, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Light and Dark

    Hey, ChocolateCello! This review is going to be short, and I apologize for that. But I'll try my best to be helpful. In fact, I'll be helpful once per stanza. ...

    Aug 30, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Society

    WARNING: THE FOLLOWING IS A RANT ABOUT HOW GOOD THIS IS. Hello there, Biluata. For this review, I don't want to focus on the linguistics here, but on the content. ...

    Aug 30, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Silent but shouting

    Hey there, Joe! Here's a short-but-sweet review, just like your short-but-sweet poem! I'll be focusing on 3 main ideas for you, if you don't mind. Content: (1) Elevation of language. ...

    Aug 30, 2015
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: For VeerenVKS

    Hey there, 1MSLS (decided to abbreviate 'cus I'm lazy)! Like Doctor of the Feel Good, I'm going to try to review this. Because it's Review Day and EVERYTHING SHALL BE ...

    Aug 30, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: This Goes Out To

    Hey there, roeckercody! IronSpark here. Today I'll be focusing on the three stanzas here that I think could use some revision. 1. This goes out to the athletes Working hard ...

    Aug 30, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Ode to Volatility

    Hey there, Arkhaion! IronSpark here. I just want to warn you: you may be receiving an over-the-top number of reviews from me in the next couple days. I'm working on ...

    Aug 30, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Memories Past

    Hey there, GreenTulip! I really want to help you make this the best piece possible, so in this review I'll be spotlighting three suggestions I have for you and your ...

    Aug 30, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Other, General Re: The state of Silence: estranged

    Hey there, Flite! This is going to be a short review because I want to talk about one thing and one thing only. I find this thing really interesting, and ...

    Aug 30, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Fantasy Re: Chapter 2.1, The Name Game

    Hey there, Blackhawk! This is going to be a fairly short review, because this is a fairly short chapter. I'll be touching on three main points surrounding the way you ...

    Aug 30, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I lost my way back home

    Hey there, Prakash. I'll be going through this by stanza, if you don't mind! The time won’t give our old days back at any cost, only the memories, it left ...

    Aug 30, 2015


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