Hannah

I think this is fine the way it is. It's not going to leave me with anything after I read it, but I'm sure it completely filled your purpose, which ...

This is what the poem meant to me: us against them. The people who appreciate sadness versus the bring and happy people whose colors we don't think are actual colors, ...

Woah there~ First impression: way too long of a first sentence. Too many things thrown at me at once. My impression. The night is crisp. Why let us into it ...

I was really annoyed in the middle, but I came to love it and want more from it by the end, especially those last couple of lines, 'cause they are ...

Haha, I like that you gave him absolutely no room for excuses. This is an amazing dialogue and as a future English teacher, I hope I'd have this kind of ...

Hey, Aley girl! I like the idea of this speaker rejecting the sad story that someone is clearly pretty desperate to tell, 'cause the speaker just doesn't want to hear ...

Oh my god, please don't put in references. There is like zero reason to put in references. These are big names in literature, and you GIVE examples of their writing ...

I like a lot of this, Reason. I like a lot of the specifics that will stick with me and keep a shade of this story floating with me: the ...

Hm. I wonder about this piece. Is this a character exercise? Is this a personal journal bit? I'd like it from the voice of a character I think, in a ...

Oof! I feel completely on the receiving end of this, as I can remember the times when I've said sorry and REALLY tried to change and couldn't bring myself to ...

The first stanza feels entirely disconnected from the rest of the poem. I think it's more of a prologue. I also think in this particular place the Poe reference detracts ...

I can tell this is raw, but maybe I'm biased from reading your replies to reviews. Here's what I would suggest to get deeper into this: You have captured the ...

This has been in my to-do list for too long! So I'll jump right in. I would first like to say that I loved the weird sense of familiarity that ...

I don't even understand why you posted in your blog that you aren't "really a poet". I guess it can be about what you feel more comfortable communicating through, but ...

Hey, Lylas. Before I review, I want to tell a story about something I'll remember for the rest of my life. I used to take voice lessons at the first ...