Hannah

Oh god, I literally cannot. But! I do! Want to critique this because it needs a little cleaning up. First place is when they first go into the woods. Dove ...

I'm just going to echo most of what your first reviewer said. People who like poetry read like millions of poems in their lifetimes, and yet in just the past ...

This is a strong beginning, Shino. I think this is my first time reading something of yours, and I'm happy I did. Things are solid. You make me interested by ...

Coral, this is really lovely. I really like narrative in poems, so I like how clear the progression is from the beginning to the end. I love the images, the ...

Sing to the night owls, girl. I think the best line of this poem is in the beginning. We all seem to start strong, don't we. I want this: No ...

I really, really like this poem. I like the framing method, especially, because it serves to take us out and bring us back into the action that's going on that ...

Hey, Jack. The first thing that knocked me out of my "this is lovely" was the addition of "forgot" so close to "remember". Like, I realize it was intentional, but ...

Hey there, Awesomesauce! I am here once again~ I want to start by saying, ugh, this is a feeling that every poet on the Earth would be proud to rightly ...

It's okay and normal to be bitter and angry at someone, but usually when you come off as bitter, listeners assume you are railing against something you deserved? I mean... ...

Hehe, I agree with znale1, and I'll give a little explanation as to why. It's not doing anything for your poem. There's no special meaning in it that changes with ...

Dream sequences are very hard. In prose, unlike in real life, it almost always needs to have some way for a reader to interpret it on their own, and if ...

Hey, GeeLyria. I've been meaning to get to this. I want to say, I LOVE the verses. They are the strongest points of this song. They are very narrative, very ...

Look at that big bulky title sitting atop that little leg of a poem. Is that where you wanted the real poem to be? It seems like that's where it's ...

I am so sad this hadn't been reviewed, but I see you've been around pretty recently, so maybe you'll want to go back and patch this up with reviews from ...

Channeling a little bit of the Kiera Knightly Pride and Prejudice, you are. haha. That said, the first thing I want out of this poem is less adjectives. The ardently ...