Hannah

Here I am again! Whoa, whoa, whoa, what? Suddenly third person narration? What informed your choice here? Do you plan on going back to change the earlier chapters into third ...

Hi again, Where she's lying, she'll accuse me of being a pervert and a molester, and will report m to the police! Ugh, no. While you've explained some of the ...

Hi, again. I was just going to give my readers' reactions, but I did notice something about craft that I think could help you with any future works you create. ...

Hey there, Kman. So what I'm going to do for these reviews is just to react to the story as a reader. If my reactions are what you want from ...

Hi there, Sharon, I'm here for a review. Sorry this piece has gone so long without another pair of eyes on it -- essays aren't usually as popular for whatever ...

Hey, there, Wriskypump, You have got me pulled in from the very first paragraph. I am so excited to see the refreshing voice and the confidence in the relationship with ...

Hi, there, LorenT. It looks as though you've forgotten some of this? Or maybe this serves as your prologue? Although we do break up our novels into digestible chunks on ...

Hi, there, Messenger! First I have to say that I don't claim to be religious myself, though I've attended church and religious schools at different points in my life, so ...

Hey there, Zero, I'm stopping by for a review, and I have to say I'm impressed. There is a lot that could be smoothed out in terms of rhythm and ...

Hi, again, Silberfee, How are you doing? This is Hannah, back for a review of a different one of your poems. :) You seem to have a penchant for writing ...

Hiya, Nerrvany, I feel really torn about the feedback I'm about to give, because it seems like you're pretty much aware of the flack that rhyming poetry usually gets and ...

Hi there, OreosAreLife and DivergentDemigod, I'm here for a review on review day~ I am just so full of happiness after reading this poem. I am so excited for the ...

Hey there, Queenie. I'm here for a review! I see the main narrative of this piece as this: someone was kidnapped, and (hint from the title), their kidnapper is writing ...

Aleta, hi! I read this poem actually a few days ago but didn't leave a review on it. I had a lot of thoughts and wasn't quite sure how to ...

Hey there, Tigeraye, The narrative of this poem is really accessible, and I find that pleasing. It describes an emotional situation where the narrator has kind of been watching from ...