Hannah

There are a lot of different emotions and situations at work in this poem. It's very complex, covers a lot of different trains of thoughts, and for that I think ...

Hmm. This poem presents an interesting situation, and maybe presents two interesting situations. I'm not sure. The beginning and the end of this poem make me think of a single ...

Hey, Yazi. I was reading this poem and looking at your avatar, and I wanted to base my review around that. Your avatar says that there's an art around lost ...

Yup. I gotta agree with the user below me when I say I can't follow the plot of this poem. It's like if I write a meaningless sentence. I might ...

Hey, Omni. I saw you posted this in our team forum, so I thought I'd drop by, and I'm glad I did. It seems like tackling the topic of Atlantis ...

I bet it felt great for you to write this poem. It seems really relevant to information you've been receiving recently, and it's clear that you're feeling a really strong ...

Perfect ending to this chapter. It introduces a new character and puts a lot of life into her already. I'm also glad some of my questions about the elementals were ...

Ooh, a fantastic opening! Haha, and I know there are walls and fences everywhere in fiction, but the bright blue eyes part made me think first of Game of Thrones ...

Huh! Hey ERZA. I stopped by based on your request on our Fire Flowers wall. Hopefully I will be helpful to you. (: What I noticed was strong in this ...

This is nice. I like all the categories you give your living characters. It matches up nicely with the categories of the characters in the opening. I also like that ...

Oh my gosh. Shockingly sad. First of all, please don't capitalize the beginning of every line. Punctuation poetry the way you would prose unless you're specifically playing with the punctuation. ...

Hmm. I like the tightness of the rhyme and rhythm here. I really appreciate it, because it lets all the reviewers focus on the words instead of getting thrown off ...

Oh, I finally figured out what bothered me about the way they described each other. They're describing each other the way you'd describe some one who died! "She had this ...

I hope this makes one of my most pressing worries clear: Haha, the number of times you use "window", especially in that short passage, is very worrying. I understand it's ...

If all the people there were criminals, why would any of them leave? I'm not challenging the reality of your story, but I think it would be beneficial to explain ...