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Re: partial/heaving.
Amelie, this is gorgeous and great and healing. I am deepest in love with the line about the fake world at five in the morning, and if anyone reading this ...
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Re: fade
Hey there, Lupa, So what I am seeing in this poem is something that happens to me a lot . I get a really good idea, so my first stanza ...
May 1, 2017 -
Re: kintsugi- a call to arms
Apricity, hi! OR SHOULD I SAY FLITE. I am loving the beginning of this poem - it lures me in softly, with the calm and noiseless serenity of a hot ...
May 1, 2017 -
Re: Ascension: Corso 17 (The Myriad book 1)
Hey there, Feltrix! I am stoppin' by this piece in what appears to be a great, action-packed middle, so excuse my ignorance of the previous chapters. I'll be asking a ...
May 1, 2017 -
Re: Hatred on the Net: What You Can Do About Cyberbullying
Hey there! This is a very relevant piece of work. I'm currently an educator, and I think we still struggle finding ways to effectively describe cyberbullying enough that we can ...
May 1, 2017 -
Re: Anxiety; How To Say It Right For Me
Hi there! So, not going to lie, I totally just read the bold words first before reading any of the rest. I like that you emphasized a smaller message within ...
May 1, 2017 -
Re: The Crooked Little Girl
Dear Nourul, Thank you for sharing this poem. I think it aims to describe quite a specific set of thoughts, and I have had them before myself, so I love ...
Apr 30, 2017 -
Re: A World of Wonders
Rascalover, Hi! I am not sure that I've left a review on a piece of yours before, so here's to a day of firsts! There's a lot of deep stuff ...
Apr 30, 2017 -
Re: Shoes
Hey, Ashley, I like the premise of this poem -- it's always a worthy topic to discuss why we shouldn't judge people by how they look. And for some reason, ...
Apr 30, 2017 -
Re: My Best Friend
Oh, Finderman, hi. I enjoyed the poems I read from you before so I thought I might stop by to see another, and this is what greeted me. A personal, ...
Apr 30, 2017 -
Re: bulletproof
Wow, Kayla, I am really impressed by the way this poem shifts from seeming to be about a romantic relationship to revealing a focus more on consideration of religion. It ...
Apr 30, 2017 -
Re: Silence Remains
Hey there, Dime, I'm stoppin' by for a review on this fine May Review Day. So what I find interesting is how calm and elegant the title of this poem ...
Apr 30, 2017 -
Re: things no one will understand go together but make perfect sense in my head
Hey, Cas, I don't think I've actually had the chance to review a poem by you, at least not in a hot second (long while). But I enjoyed this. I ...
Apr 30, 2017 -
Re: Love and Loss
Hey, VegasLights, Gosh, if this isn't a sad and common situation. I think anybody who comes along to read your poem will know what kind of disappointment you're referring to. ...
Apr 30, 2017 -
Re: What Death Looks Like
Kara, oh my goodness, congratulations on writing your first poem! How did you like it? What parts were easiest and which parts were most difficult? What inspired you to write ...
Apr 30, 2017
