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  • Poetry » General, General Re: partial/heaving.

    Amelie, this is gorgeous and great and healing. I am deepest in love with the line about the fake world at five in the morning, and if anyone reading this ...

    May 1, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: fade

    Hey there, Lupa, So what I am seeing in this poem is something that happens to me a lot . I get a really good idea, so my first stanza ...

    May 1, 2017
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: kintsugi- a call to arms

    Apricity, hi! OR SHOULD I SAY FLITE. I am loving the beginning of this poem - it lures me in softly, with the calm and noiseless serenity of a hot ...

    May 1, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Ascension: Corso 17 (The Myriad book 1)

    Hey there, Feltrix! I am stoppin' by this piece in what appears to be a great, action-packed middle, so excuse my ignorance of the previous chapters. I'll be asking a ...

    May 1, 2017
  • Article / Essay » General, Culture Re: Hatred on the Net: What You Can Do About Cyberbullying

    Hey there! This is a very relevant piece of work. I'm currently an educator, and I think we still struggle finding ways to effectively describe cyberbullying enough that we can ...

    May 1, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Anxiety; How To Say It Right For Me

    Hi there! So, not going to lie, I totally just read the bold words first before reading any of the rest. I like that you emphasized a smaller message within ...

    May 1, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Crooked Little Girl

    Dear Nourul, Thank you for sharing this poem. I think it aims to describe quite a specific set of thoughts, and I have had them before myself, so I love ...

    Apr 30, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Spiritual Re: A World of Wonders

    Rascalover, Hi! I am not sure that I've left a review on a piece of yours before, so here's to a day of firsts! There's a lot of deep stuff ...

    Apr 30, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical Re: Shoes

    Hey, Ashley, I like the premise of this poem -- it's always a worthy topic to discuss why we shouldn't judge people by how they look. And for some reason, ...

    Apr 30, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: My Best Friend

    Oh, Finderman, hi. I enjoyed the poems I read from you before so I thought I might stop by to see another, and this is what greeted me. A personal, ...

    Apr 30, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: bulletproof

    Wow, Kayla, I am really impressed by the way this poem shifts from seeming to be about a romantic relationship to revealing a focus more on consideration of religion. It ...

    Apr 30, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Silence Remains

    Hey there, Dime, I'm stoppin' by for a review on this fine May Review Day. So what I find interesting is how calm and elegant the title of this poem ...

    Apr 30, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: things no one will understand go together but make perfect sense in my head

    Hey, Cas, I don't think I've actually had the chance to review a poem by you, at least not in a hot second (long while). But I enjoyed this. I ...

    Apr 30, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Love and Loss

    Hey, VegasLights, Gosh, if this isn't a sad and common situation. I think anybody who comes along to read your poem will know what kind of disappointment you're referring to. ...

    Apr 30, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: What Death Looks Like

    Kara, oh my goodness, congratulations on writing your first poem! How did you like it? What parts were easiest and which parts were most difficult? What inspired you to write ...

    Apr 30, 2017


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