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Haileyg21

Haileyg21

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: Fairytale of tasks

    Hiyo! this is my review. I dont really tell you what you messed up like some I just say what was good and what I loved about it and what ...

    Jan 15, 2021
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: moonlit car session

    Hi. A review. I think this is really good. It really stand out and it holds peoples attention easily. I Love that it flows really well. so thank you for ...

    Jan 15, 2021
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Humor Re: belt and pants

    Hiyo! its Hailey! And heres my Amazing review for an Amazing Post. This is super good. I love that its in the View point of the pants. I love this ...

    Jan 14, 2021
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative Re: Foolish pleasure

    Hiyo! its Hailey! this was Amazing. I thought that this part ‘Red Rum, Red Rum, RED RUM’ the men chant, Should I tell them the meaning? No, I shouldn’t! I ...

    Jan 14, 2021
  • Poetry » General, Lyrical Re: Ash

    Ok hi sorry. I love you poem.. its so heartfelt and relatable. I love the way you put the words so effortlessly with each other (probably with effort). It amazes ...

    Dec 7, 2020
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, General Re: I need you to stay

    You song hold meaning its got a little piece of your heart in it waiting to sore. It holds so much truth and emotion behind it that it actually pulls ...

    Nov 20, 2020
  • Poetry » Humor, Realistic Re: Where're we going?

    Heyo. Here's a review! this is beautiful. I feel like any normal family does this to there kids. its funny and people can relate to it so that's why you ...

    Nov 20, 2020
  • Poetry » Humor, Culture Re: Maladaptive Daydreaming

    "His name was Leo and he didn’t exist, and yet still my mind seemed to insist that the fantasy of him and me was more than just a lovely dream. ...

    Nov 20, 2020
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Literature Re: Mother Earth

    Ok. I noticed that you don't have any reviews. SO here i am. The lovely theo to review your poem. Its random i know but whatevs. You poem hold the ...

    Nov 20, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: The Girl with the Dark Wavy Hair

    Ok so heres my review. I got shivers. never in my 16 years have i seem someone who cant put such beatutiful words on "paper" and make them flow so ...

    Nov 20, 2020
  • Poetry » Romantic, Other Re: The Piece That Was Missing

    Ok wow this is good. Honestly the way you word this is so good. This reminds me of a lot of the things i have gone through in life and ...

    Nov 20, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Scribbles 2

    HI! I love your poem. honestly when i read the name "scribbles" i thought it would be bad. BUT the way you use the words in this make it so ...

    Oct 13, 2020
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Dramatic Re: Moon Over a Sleeping Forest

    Hi another Review! WOW the way you make these words fit together so well When you say "With four miscarriages And one last hope." It honestly speaks to me in ...

    Oct 13, 2020
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: The Lighthouse (Revised)

    Hi... i'm just here to review.... I promise i don't write mean ones I have to say your poem has a lot of emotion behind it. When you describe it.... ...

    Oct 13, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Peeking in

    hello... I'm just here. I think ill review your poem with a positive Review! The way you use your words shows that there's true feeling behind what your writing and ...

    Oct 9, 2020


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