Hadj

Hey there! Hadj here to review your poem! (GO TEAM BLACK!) Criticism I think some of your lines were a bit too long, and it caused an awkward imbalance as ...

Hey there! Hadj here to review your poems! (GO TEAM BLACK!) REVIEW OF WELCOME HOME Nitpicks My only nitpick is the lack of punctuation. Love is loud A lions roar ...

Hadj here to review your "article/essay" Nitpicks shark infested ocean that attack jerks. Oceans don't attack people (also it would be attack s , try this: ocean infested with sharks ...

Hey there! Hadj here to review your work! (GO BLACK!) Criticism Overall, I did not enjoy this work. It sounded like something I'd read on a middle school bathroom stall. ...

Hey there fortis! Hadj here to review! (GO BLACK!) I absolutely love the series you have going here! I read the first three, but never got around to reviewing them, ...

Hey! Hadj here to review your work! This is fairly long, so I'll break it up by paragraph to better analyze it. Unfortunately, I don't have a lot of time, ...

Hey! Hadj here to review your letter! First off, you must really enjoy puns! This is the second piece of yours I've read that specifically focuses on them! And I ...

Hey there laughmaster! Hadj here to review your exclamatory work! Maybe I'll even be bold enough to work in a few puns! Let me know if you find them! Nitpicks ...

Hey! Hadj here to review! Analysis So, it seems that the speaker of this poem is incredibly shy. They are cowering behind the others, and too nervous to try to ...

Hey here! Hadj to review! Nitpicks I don't have any real nitpicks, but I was confused by the second to last line: Perhaps selfishly. [For you.] It seems a bit ...

Hey ho! Hadj here to review your story! Nitpicks I am the worst at picking up on things, and didn't find anything. (sorry) Criticism The first four lines were awesome! ...

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Hey there Flite! Hadj here to review your... thing :P Nitpicks Just one: You know, is all true. should be You know, it's all true. Criticism This isn't quite a ...

Hey there 1morestupidlovesong! Hadj here to review your poem! Nitpicks Got nothing! Criticism I was trying to decide whether the purpose of this poem is humor and randomosity, or whether ...

Hadj here to try and review this. To start, I'm not sure what you meant by this poem. I'm 90% sure that it was completely random, but lets explore a ...