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Re: Making Words Rhyme Within A Pattern Is Called A Poem, Even When It's Out Of Context And Has A Ridiculously Long Title
Hello Srange! Gymnast2801 here with a review! Hahahaha! I love this 'poem'! I have never been able to write a poem and this gets pretty much everything! Love it! I ...
Jul 25, 2016 -
Re: My Guilty Obsession
Hello herbgirl! Its Gymnast2801 here with a review for you! My overall thought is that I like this! Short, simple and quick to the point. I think I can tell ...
Jun 8, 2016 -
Re: An Essay on Society (from the perspective of a cat)
Hello Heather! Gymnast2801 here for a review! Fist off, wow. This was such an empowering pice of work about society! Haha, joking. But I still really liked this! It wasn't ...
May 31, 2016 -
Re: Time
Hello car1y23! Gymnsat2801 here with a review! Long thick matt hair hangs down his back. Here, you need a comma after "Long" and "thick". Also, "matt" should be "matted". His ...
May 31, 2016 -
Re: Spoiled Rotten
Hello soundofmind! Gymnast2801 here with a review! I've read your poem and it's pretty good! I love how you rhymed it all and meat must have been a hard topic ...
May 31, 2016 -
Re: Arguments and Misplaced Distrust
Hello acm! It's Gymnast2801 here with a review! I must admit that I have never reviewed anything like this so this will be a learning experience for me. Please correct ...
May 31, 2016 -
Re: Prologue : Battle for paris
Hello Leekeer! Gymnast2801 here with a review! I will give you my overall thought of your prologue after I correct/edit because I will be reading through as I do so. ...
May 31, 2016 -
Re: Life
Hello KaiRyu! It's Gymnast2801 here with a review! This poem was so intriguing with house you started. "Lift is short" Simple, quick to the point and it makes you want ...
May 31, 2016 -
Re: Dear People-Who-Are-Not-Shy
Hi EternalRain! Gymnast2801 here with a review! Wow. I would just like to say wow. I am not really an inorvet, I make friends pretty easily and don't have that ...
May 31, 2016 -
Re: A Haiku About Finals
Hello Elysium, fellow Team Weasley member there with a review! Hahaha, I love this poem! Well, I'm not sure that I would mark it as a poem but...what else would ...
May 29, 2016 -
Re: no. 88
Hello silverhanded! It's Gymnast2801 here with a review for Team Weasely! I will give you my overall thought of your work after editing and correcting because I will do that ...
May 29, 2016 -
Re: Why Cure Humanity When The Remedies Numb The Brain? Or, Salvation is A Killing Joke
Hi there KingQueenKnave! It's Gymnast2801 here with a review for Team Weasely! I will give you my overall thought of, Why Cure Humanity What The Remedies Numb The Brain? Or, ...
May 29, 2016 -
Re: Guilt is the Source of Sorrows
Hello AsTheFlowersGrow! I'm here with a review for Team Weasely! Inwould like to inform you that I will put my overall thought of, Guilt is the Source of Sorrows, at ...
May 29, 2016 -
Re: a little life update
Hey there Annie! It's Gymnast2801 here with a review for Team Weasely! I will put my overall though of your Little Life Update at the end of this review because ...
May 29, 2016 -
Re: "Between the Devil and the Deep Blue Sea" Review
Hello Lightsong! I'm here with a review! I will give my final, overall opinion at the end of this review because I will be editing and correcting as I read ...
May 29, 2016