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Re: self help (insecurities)
Hi Ava, it's Gymnast2801 here with a review! Oh wow, I really love this. Starting off, I thought it was going to be about how you where depressed you where ...
Aug 31, 2016 -
Re: Nature Has Saved My Life
Hi KazeyBear, it's Gymnast2801 here with a review for Team Jawbreaker! First off, your begging in quite intriguing! Starting off with something so interesting (being crippled with pain) is a ...
Aug 28, 2016 -
Re: Night of Ethereal Pain
Hi there sandmen, it's Gymnast2801 here with a review for Team Jawbreaker! Your whole poem was overall, pretty good. I'd say you definatly lived up to your horror/supernatural theme and ...
Aug 28, 2016 -
Re: translucent
Hi there Color of the Sky, it's Gymnast2801 here with a review! Wow, this is good. I think you get your point across well, that people can only go so ...
Aug 28, 2016 -
Re: Religious Perspective - My Take
Hi Aravind, it's Gymnast2801 here with a review for Team Jawbreaker! First of all, I would like to say that I am a Catholic so because I've been raised as ...
Aug 28, 2016 -
Re: The "Friends of Faith Thrift Store"
Hi Morrigan, it's Gymnast2801 here with a review for Team Jawbreaker! First off, I think this is good. I think there is room to improve but we all have room ...
Aug 28, 2016 -
Re: The Edge
Hi there Casanova, it's Gymnast2801 with a review for Team Jawbreaker! Oh, wow. This was actually a very nice poem that actually rhymed!! I love rhyming poems, they are a ...
Aug 28, 2016 -
Re: Do you know?
Hi derneeuq, it's Gymnast2801 here with a review for Team Jawbreaker. First of all, I think this is good, but it could be better with a little work. It's funny ...
Aug 28, 2016 -
Re: Different
Hi there sandman, I see you've had some fried ship problems? I'm truly sorry that you've lost a friend. I understand how hard that can be, I've moved around a ...
Aug 28, 2016 -
Re: Everything Will Be Okay In The End
Hi HeyImLikeHannah, it's Gymnast2801 here with a review for Team Jawbreaker! Oh, wow. I think this is beautiful. It states the growing issues of our world and I love how ...
Aug 28, 2016 -
Re: Rejected Thoughts
Hi DamienCyfer, it's Gymnast2801 here with a review for Team Jawbreaker! Wow, this was good. I would have to describe it as deep, meaningful, powerful, and extremely true. This reminds ...
Aug 28, 2016 -
Re: Quotations!
Hi Augustus, it's Gymnast2801 here with a review for Team Jawbreaker! I am planning to review each quotation as I read so I will give my overall thought at the ...
Aug 28, 2016 -
Re: 1-Write a will
Hello Truthsreflection! It's Gymnast2801 here with a review! I will start with correcting your work as I do this while I read through. At the end, I will give you ...
Aug 10, 2016 -
Re: Mom
Hi there Ely! Let me just say that first I was on Pinterest today looking at Mom memes and then I go to the Hreen Room and the first thing ...
Aug 1, 2016 -
Re: Blink and It's Gone
Hi Kazeybear! Gymnast2801 here with a review for Team Valor! Well, I would like to applaud you on your poem. I feel like you make it rhym very well and ...
Jul 30, 2016
