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Re: The Passages of Time
Boom! Gummy's the name, reviewing's my game! So, I'm here to do a review for my teammate KittyBee and her poem "The Passages of Time!"~ Awright, so, first things first, ...
Dec 29, 2013 -
Re: Regret
I' m a fan of poems with a rhyme scheme, especially ones that go back to the classic a-a-b-b pattern. This one was masterfully done, and I commend you for ...
Dec 29, 2013 -
Re: Kagaku
Nyeh... What's up, DoP? I noticed the call to arms up in the Front Page and decided to help out for the cause. So, without further delay... Gummy's the name, ...
Dec 18, 2013 -
Re: Who is the King of the Playground?
:O A concrete poem! This deserves to be reviewed even after Review Day is over :D Well, I'll introduce myself anyway. Gummy's my name, reviewing's my game! Okay, so, first ...
Sep 30, 2013 -
Re: Curses
Gummy's the name, reviewing's my game! Wow. This poem hit deep... maybe it's because of the whole "I fear myself" theme you've got going on here and how it compares ...
Sep 29, 2013 -
Re: Where in the world?
Hello~ Gummy's my name, reviewing is my game! I've camped out in the woods before, so I can confidently say that I really grasped the feeling expressed when the poem ...
Sep 29, 2013 -
Re: Daughter of a Veteran.
Gummy's the name, and I'm here to review! ...Get back in there, tear. This was a deeply moving tale stemming from a painful topic that has broken hearts since before ...
Sep 29, 2013 -
Re: Ostara
Gummy here, and I am here to review~! Only 8 lines, and yet I see so much life in this poem! From what I've read, Ostara is a Wiccan festival ...
Sep 29, 2013 -
Re: Lacuna
Hello! Gummy's my name, and I'm here to review! Heh. "Rouge." I see what you did there. -snicker- Well, it's not like I expected anything less from you, dragonofphoenix! You ...
Sep 29, 2013 -
Re: Waiting
Hello, my name is Gummy, and I'm here to review~ Okay, now I'm really curious as to what she's waiting for... especially after that dramatic countdown you finished with. Well, ...
Sep 29, 2013 -
Re: Twerk (A Poem From A Rapper's Point of View)
Hello, Gummy's my name and I'm here to review~ I'm a huge fan of poems where the entire thing is an allusion to a certain theme, and even the diction ...
Sep 29, 2013 -
Re: Martin
Hello! My name is Gummy, and I'm here to review~ Now, I think the most important thing this poem is missing is punctuation. The only trace of punctuation in this ...
Sep 28, 2013 -
Re: ​Chapter one
Hello! My name is Gummy, and I'll be reviewing this chapter. I really liked the realism in the way Katie and Sarah reacted to how Xavier spoke to them. On ...
Sep 20, 2013
