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  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Diary of a Gokan Higaishi

    I'll... just ignore the erotic theme that this story keeps shoving into my face. The grammar could use a little fine-tuning, especially in some areas. I'll explain later, 'cause custom ...

    Sep 7, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Narrative Re: Kambili:Chapter two and three

    Hey-o! Gummy is here to give you a well-deserved review! I don't know if it's a moral obligation in my case, but I read through the first chapter a few ...

    Sep 7, 2016
  • Poetry » General, Narrative Re: I sleep a lot, these days...

    Hey-o! My name is Gummy, and I'm here to review your poem~ As usual, I'm going to review this poem using the Review Sandwich method. This means that I will ...

    Sep 5, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, General Re: Lies and Deceit- Chapter 2

    Hey-o! My name is Gummy and I am here to review this chapter of your work. As custom dictates, I've caught up with the rest of the story before starting ...

    Sep 5, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Shadow Crown (CHAPTER 2)

    Hey-o! My name is Gummy, and I'm here to review your work! Before I begin, I would like to point out that I actually read through the first chapter a ...

    Sep 5, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Science Fiction Re: Archmagus-Prologue

    Hey-o! My name is Gummy and I'm here to review your work! As custom dictates, I'll be looking at the good points first before jumping into what I think leaves ...

    Sep 5, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Fantasy Re: Chaos Edge 1.1

    Hello, hello! My name is Gummy and I'm here to review this piece in particular! I'll try to keep this swift and deadly for both our sakes. With that said, ...

    Sep 5, 2016
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Horror Re: For I Have Sinned (Part 2)

    Hello again! My name is Gummy and I'm here to review the second part of your work. As usual, I'm going to review the best points I could find after ...

    Sep 5, 2016
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Horror Re: For I Have Sinned (Part 1)

    My name is Gummy, and I'm here to review your work. As usual, I'll start by quickly homing in on the good news first and point out whatever I feel ...

    Sep 5, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: I Walk Among The Shadows

    Hello, hello! My name is Gummy and I'm here to review your work! I'll skip the chit chat and cut right into the chase... Oh, I'm sorry, that was a ...

    Sep 5, 2016
  • Other » General, General Re: The other two

    I don't know what led me to this particular poem, but I like to think of this as some sort of huge coincidence. Anyway, I'll cut to the chase: My ...

    Sep 5, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Historical Fiction Re: Flora Dennis and the Island of Two Eyes - Chapter One

    \Ahem. Hello~ My name is Gummy and I am here to review this first chapter of yours. So, why don't we start with an explanation on why I was able ...

    Dec 28, 2014
  • Lyrics » Realistic, Lyrical Re: Can You Hear Me?

    Good evening, yubbies21! My name is Gummy, and I'll take the post of the intrepid reviewer who reviews songs without listening to the melody beforehand! As such, I've taken some ...

    Sep 28, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Rest, my love.

    Hai hai~ Gummy's my name, reviewing's my game! In the name of the Cobalt Critiquers, I'm going to review "Rest, my love" by JordanPierre2000! Huzzah! All right, so... I'll start ...

    Jan 26, 2014
  • Script » General, General Re: ???Checking out me history

    Awright! Gummy's my name, reviewing's my name! Tonight, I'll be reviewing... um... "???Checking out me history," by lilyE. I'll at least give you points for hooking me with the title. ...

    Jan 26, 2014


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