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Re: Ashura: A World of Sword and Magic Prologue
Hello! My name is Gummy and I'm here to review your work. I was originally planning to review your fourth chapter, but I decided to read the whole thing from ...
Dec 29, 2016 -
Re: Haiku 24
Hey, good evening! My name is Gummy, and I'm here to review this Haiku of yours. This review is going to be a bit shorter on purpose, since Haikus are ...
Dec 24, 2016 -
Re: like steppingstones.
Hmm... so that's what the word "scotoma" means. ...Anyway, my name is Gummy and I'm here to review your work. I personally quite enjoyed the use of uncommon words in ...
Dec 22, 2016 -
Re: I Am Glad You Are Gone
Welcome to YWS. I hope you enjoy your stay, regardless of your purpose. My name is Gummy, and I'm here to review this debut piece of yours. The format for ...
Sep 14, 2016 -
Re: Friends?: Scene One (Edit version)
Well, I'm glad you actually bothered taking the first step, at the very least. Hello, my name is Gummy and I'm here to review this lighthearted piece of yours. I'll ...
Sep 12, 2016 -
Re: Always.
I loved this story. It played with my feelings more than just a bit, and I loved it because it managed to do so. Unrequited love does that to bunker ...
Sep 12, 2016 -
Re: You Are My Sunshine
...I totally feel you. My grandfather fell to Alzheimer's earlier this year, and I could totally find myself in the speaker's words. But enough about me; the stage is yours, ...
Sep 12, 2016 -
Re: Blocked
Pardon my butting in. I'll be finishing this review in a jiffy. It's actually kind of funny, actually; I actually found myself in the same situation as the speaker in ...
Sep 12, 2016 -
Re: A dark sky
Hello! My name is Gummy, and I'm here to review your work today! be honest, this is actually a pretty acceptable work in my eyes. It could just be me, ...
Sep 12, 2016 -
Re: You Are In Love
Hello! My name is Gummy and I'm here to review this songfic of yours! Long story short, I wanted to let you know how things work in Gummy-Ville so we ...
Sep 12, 2016 -
Re: Pokemon Ultimate Evolution Season Three: Episode 1, Rosy Locks
To be honest, I never expected to find a Pokemon fanfic here that wasn't a total flop. I'm actually very picky about my Pokemon stories, since it has always been--and ...
Sep 11, 2016 -
Re: Chapter 1: The Recipe for Coziness
Hello! My name's Gummy and I here to review this chapter of yours, free of charge! (Hey, it's a learning experience for both of us, of course it's fair.) As ...
Sep 10, 2016 -
Re: Not dying, but falling in love
Hello, hello! As per your request, I have arrived to review your poem. Sure, I had to research quite a bit to understand the references, but I personally think it ...
Sep 10, 2016 -
Re: The Shadow Crown (CHAPTER 3)
Looks like someone is caught between a rock and a hard place. I promised I'd read more from you soon, and now I'm actually keeping my promise... for once. Now, ...
Sep 7, 2016 -
Re: Just Listen..
I figured I'd eventually run into one of your works, Casanova! My name is Gummy, and I'll be reviewing this piece of yours. I'll cut the chit-chat and head on ...
Sep 7, 2016
