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Re: Dappled II: Bonfire
Hey there! GreenLight24 here with a review for you today! :D Really cool poem here. I liked the overall idea of the bonfire as a metaphor for the narrator's coming ...
Jun 4, 2015 -
Re: Nobody Wants You
Hey there! GreenLight24 here with a review for you! First off, this piece was pretty hilarious in a really, sardonic, salty kinda way. Perfect Vietnam War humor if there is ...
Jun 4, 2015 -
Re: Dungeon Rescue
Hi there! :D GreenLight24 here with a review for you! I've been away from YWS for awhile so I hope this review knocks the rust off quick! First of all, ...
Jun 4, 2015 -
Re: Game On Level 1.5
Hello there, Niraco! Here I am with a review for you on this fabulous Summer finale Review Day!!! :D I recall reviewing one of your previous chapters and I remember ...
Aug 31, 2014 -
Re: Tristesse Chapter 4
Hello there and happy review day. GreenLight24 here with a review for you, representing Team Green! :D I haven't read any of the other chapters of this novel, so I'll ...
Aug 31, 2014 -
Re: The Story Of Summer (Ch. 8): Sisters
Hey there, porcupinestrongwill! Here I am representing Team Green on this fabulous Review Day. First, I'll lay out a few things I thought you did well here and then I'll ...
Aug 31, 2014 -
Re: Asenath:Tears on the Sand Chapter 17
Hello there, Aravis10! GreenLight24 here with a review for you on this fabulous Sunday morning. I see you are also representing Team Plasma. :D Before I start this review I'd ...
Jul 27, 2014 -
Re: Revolution - Chapter 5
Hello there, Zephion! GreenLight24 here with a review for you on this terrific Thursday night. :) Before I get into the thick of this review, let me take a minute ...
Jul 11, 2014 -
Re: Life Without Regrets [Chapter One]- Edited
Hey there, Kanome! GreenLight24 here with a review for you during this Review World Cup! :D Before I get into the meat of this review, let me just take a ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Taste the Sorrow ( this chapter is now referred to as CH 2 ) *Revised*
Hey there, Holysocks. Whatsup! GreenLight24 here with a review for you on this terrific Tuesday morning! I'm not going to be focusing on spelling and grammar much, so let's see ...
Jun 17, 2014 -
Re: Her time of the month
Hey there, wickedlygoodwriter! GreenLight24 here with a review for you on this magnificent Monday night that will be a terrific Tuesday morning in T minus seven minutes. (Yes I waited ...
Jun 17, 2014 -
Re: Biological Warfare
Hiya! I saw that you added a new short and I just couldn't keep myself from reading it! Here's another review for you. :) Wow. This was even funnier than ...
Jun 17, 2014 -
Re: Chapter 6 - The Puppet Emperor
Hi there, Alvarin! GreenLight24 here with another review of this novel for you on this magnificent Monday night! :D Let's get this party started!!! Wow. You've done it again. Just ...
Jun 17, 2014 -
Re: Of Fights and Letters: Chapter 6: The Sandwich
Hahahahaha! Hey there, liveandbreathewords! GreenLight24 here with a review for you on this magnificent Monday afternoon! Before I begin this review, let me just take a minute to lay out ...
Jun 16, 2014 -
Re: Heaven and Hell chapter one
Hey there, MonaLisa211214! GreenLight24 here with a review for you on this fabulous Saturday morning! Congrats on submitting your very first work!!! :D Before we kick off this review, let ...
Jun 14, 2014