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Re: There Wendi Goes
Hi Prophecy, Glauke here for a review! Nice to meet you. Interpretation This is a short story about a young girl or woman luring a man to her home to ...
Oct 8, 2020 -
Re: The Bottle
Hi Lexi! I'm Glauke, here for a review. Nice to meet you, and welcome to the site! Description This poem is about addiction and recovery. It focuses on alcoholism, but ...
Oct 7, 2020 -
Re: not for a lack of words
I really enjoyed this poem. I think you did a good job portraying the nature of communication as an introvert in love, with more feelings than we necessarily know how ...
Feb 13, 2020 -
Re: Thunder
Hey there! Welcome to YWS. :) (If you ever need help with anything, don't hesitate to drop me a PM.) So, you've really got a knack for meter. My standards ...
Apr 6, 2016 -
Re: Dandruff
Hey Hadj! This was phenomenal. I love the surrealism - the whole piece has this pervasive haunting feeling that's really chilling and dark. I love it. You did an amazing ...
Apr 4, 2016 -
Re: Your problems are fake; destroy yourself.
I really liked this!! Everything flowed well, and it felt conversational and natural. The last stanza was especially insightful and definitely left a lasting impact. My analysis skills aren't so ...
Mar 20, 2016 -
Re: Taken For Granted
Hey CandyWizard! Glauke here with a review :-) I really liked this poem. I love the concept behind it - it's something I (and most everyone else, I'm sure) can ...
Oct 30, 2015 -
Re: Dreamcacther
Glauke here with a review :-) I really liked this; your imagery was lovely and the poem as a whole felt very personal. That being said, I do have a ...
Oct 30, 2015 -
Re: she was curious.
Hello there! This looks like it has some potential, although there are a few aspects that just don't quite fit right in my mind. I'll just dive right into it: ...
Oct 27, 2015 -
Re: x
Hey there Yastika! Sorry it's taken me such a very long time to get around to writing this review. I've been very busy with school and life in general - ...
Oct 15, 2014 -
Re: v
Hey there! Happy Review Day! I really liked this, it was beautifully written and I really like the idea behind it. As another reviewer noted, it had a bit of ...
Sep 28, 2014 -
Re: The Story of Monoceros
This was just so cute. I love it :) My review may be a bit biased, as I've always had a bit of a soft spot for unicorns and fairies ...
Sep 28, 2014 -
Re: Colors
Hey there! I really liked this, I have been doing a bit of research on colour psychology myself.... it's quite an interesting topic. Colours in general are so fascinating, and ...
Sep 22, 2014 -
Re: Ode to the Book
Hi there. :) I really enjoyed this. I think you accurately described what you were feeling, and your message cam through loud and clear. The last lines really finish the ...
Feb 23, 2013 -
Re: From Those Who Exist in Doric Order Architecture
Hello there. :) I'm going to give you the best review I can, even though I know nothing about the contest you wrote this for. If I criticize anything that ...
Feb 23, 2013
