GingerLizzy

This is classy, charming and a lovely read. I didn't think I'd like it much, but actually, I enjoyed it greatly. Good work and for once, I have nothing to ...

I'm not sure about this. I liked it, but I'm still not sure. The rhyming schemes were soft and entwined deep beneath which was good. Although I think it was ...

Welllll.. This was too good for words to be honest. It made me feel all groovy inside and also a bit bleh, 'cause at the moment in time, I'm not ...

This piece is beautifully written and I enjoyed reading it. The flow worked well and you established good imagary, capturing my attention fully, and that's a hard thing to do. ...

I liked this. It flowed well for a piece of writing but I do think you should think about the suggestions given. Add more information, let the reader know what's ...

I liked this, it flowed really well! Also, while I was reading it, I read it quite fast so it added a little more beat and passion into the poem ...

xD Sarah you are a silly goose. Of course I am Sir Trevor MacDonald.. In spirit and mind anyway Everyone seems to like this piece... And can relate to it ...

Uhm.. yeah and I've posted it in the wrong place... My god.. I'm having a bad day.. Sorry

I liked this... It has depth to it and flows easily, in my eyes. I'm not that good at giving advice if I must say, and I can't see anything ...

Okay.. I just read that first chapter and ralised.. I have made a few mistakes.. "if they seem familiar..." "I'm now telling you..." I am a giddy goat =]

I liked this. Really good. I like all of the rhyming stuff, 'cause I think that it makes a poem flow better and also makes it seem more fun. I ...

Hmmm I liked this I think. It flowed somewhat and the imagary is good. I like how you pump passion into some of the verses, so that the reader can ...

Hmm.. Yes good imagary and I liked how it just... Continued. It made me think and smile.. And frown but I liked it. Good work ^^

I don't know what to make of this poem. Is it good? Or bad? I like the idea... But the structure? I'm confused with this one I must say. It's.. ...

I liked this. Short. To the point. And also somewhat dark. Maybe you could make it one or two verses longer? Add more detail and maybe even make it darker, ...