GingerLizzy

What? I truly didn't understand this poem at all. Your friend's were cheery? Why were they? The flow was alright, I suppose but the imagery wasn't anything special; just simple ...

Oh my gosh, I'm looking forward to reading the rest of this, it sounds super and you've structured it well. It's rather saucy though, isn't it? Hehe. I like how ...

I liked the concpet of this, I thought it was hard hitting and something that made me sit and think about how I feel about it. But, the flow didn't ...

Hmm.. I have raging and mixed feelings about this and to be honest, I just don't know what to make of it. I liked some parts but then when I ...

Wow This is really deep and it made me stop and think for a while about all the different meanings it could have - I love stories and poems like ...

Wow.. Nice but seriously - how short? You need to beef it up a little and give the reader more information and imagery. This was nice but it started and ...

Hmm.. This was okay and it had a good rhythm but the idea is so over used that it becomes a little boiring after the tenth time of reading it. ...

I don't know why but this made me angry. You have a great idea, but have just stomped it's face down in the dirt and told it to eat mud. ...

Gosh, there have been many times that I've felt like this. I liked this, it was full of emotion; anger, hate, sadness? I enjoyed reading it and the flow was ...

Wow I thought this was like from a boyfriend to a girlfriend so it was great to see that it was about someone's mother. I loved this idea, as it ...

Okay, so here is my critique, which will not be so long. I disliked this. This is because of the chosen words you have included in this piece and that ...

I don't know about this. Some lines are really good and they create very good imagery and tension, such as when the author says that they now they are going ...

I thought the flow in this went too fast, even when read slow. I don't know if that made sense but I think it refers to the syllables in each ...

Y'know.. Everyone is saying that they liked this and to my disappoint, I didn't to be honest. The imagery just wasn't enough for me and it didn't work well with ...

Wow, this is really good. The imagery throughout was easy to work with and in my mind's eye, I could just see a ballroom full of people, masquerade style. It ...