GigiNicole17

Cate!!!!! Hey girl, I wanted to tell you some things about this piece. It's great! Like you said, it is really short for a fist chapter, but I know you'll ...

itsCate, This is a kinda short review, I didn't find anything bad...not that I was looking for it ..lol This was great! I like the humor you added along with ...

Anma, Hi! Here's a small review for you. The story was great! I love this chapter. I did feel as though maybe you could combine some of the paragraphs. But ...

BGreen, AMAZING PIECE. I hope you don't mind that I shared this with my grandfather, who grew up during this time frame, and kinda had the same story. lol I ...

HI, hiraeth, First off, the title is INCREDIBLY MOVING! It drew me to want to read your poem. You used exceptional vocabulary, and your punctuation was on point! I absolutely ...

Theia, Let me start by saying, BEAUTIFUL POEM YOU HAVE WRITTEN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love the figurative language you used like: Thy soul,embedded in mine, So beautiful. I really wish I had ...

Liberty, GREAT JOB!!! I love the rhyme scheme you used. I really have no critics for this. It's just so great. I would say that maybe you would want to ...

Hi, bhargav I'm Gigi here with a review... I, much like @kosita have mixed feelings about this poem. You kinda lost me with the theme/moral of the poem. I didn't ...

Hi, Shadow Viper! First off, GREAT PIECE!! I really love the emotion here. Just the title in itself is such a powerful word. I love the bold, and the non-bold ...

I LOVED IT!!!! It is so very relevant to what I'm going through right now. I liked the flow of the poem. I hope you've found something greater than this. ...

I love this!!! The description made me laugh out loud!!! He reminds me a lot of my younger brother, who does everything listed here, lol. Great job!! I love the ...

Blou, Great job!!! From the beginning of this story, you capture my attention, and held it all the way to the end. If I'm completely honest, and I would have ...

okay, First off, I AM LEGIT CRYING RIGHT NOW!!!! THAT WAS AMAZING!!!!! You are such a great person!!!! I love that you're praising her. Girls really need to hear that ...

Katnes, I think it was great that you decided to not only write this, but to share it with us all. I often write letters to my older self hoping ...

Hey, FireSpyGirl I enjoyed reading your poem. You did a great job! I think it's really good that you decide to share your feelings. I think you should write about ...