GeorgiaMasonIII

I'm also a survivor of maternal abuse, so this hit me right in the proverbial feels. I'll try to be as objective as possible despite that. There's a lot of ...

Mostly, I feel like this is strong. I just have a few suggestions. Obviously, songs don't ~have to follow a verse-chorus-verse-bridge-chorus structure, but I feel like if this song was ...

Feel free to take everything I say with a grain of salt, because this seems like a hip-hop song and I am completely useless at reviewing hip-hop. I know alternative ...

Your prose continues to improve with each chapter! Although the same issues with commas and capitalization that I mentioned last time are still present. I agree with GreatKing that Gann's ...

Oooh. Short but sweet! Because of the brevity, I don't have much to say, but I'll try. I like that this song doesn't have to be any longer than it ...

Hey there! I would like to see more detail from this. Most of the song is heartfelt, which is good, but a bit on the general side, which is not ...

Well, I'm glad Ella has told her siblings about the weird shadow shapes! This is really solid, but I do have some critiques. First, there are some punctuation errors, mostly ...

Remembrance already said almost everything I would have, but I have a few more comments. First, I like that I get a good sense of who Ella is right away, ...

I'm going to start by saying that I like everything you have here with the exception of my being confused by the meaning of "romance laments". The concept of romance ...

Well, Sevro already said most everything I wanted to, so I will try to give a review of substance despite having very little to add. I would flesh out the ...

Oooh, I really like this. It's a bit on the short side, but on the other hand, I don't think adding another verse or bridge or what have you is ...

I have been in this situation and have written...basically this song. (And I think you did it better than I did.) I would have liked a few more details about ...

Songs about feeling depressed/suicidal/etc. are hard to do well without either overdone or sad just for the sake of being sad. This song has neither of those problems. And I ...

I have a love/hate relationship with songs as good as this because while I really enjoy reading fine work, positive reviews tend to end up shorter! I like how heartfelt ...

I'm a huge symphonic metal fan and am also reminded of Amon Amarth. I'm also a complete sucker for epic-sounding lyrics, so I really enjoyed this. I have a few ...