GeeLyria

Wow. I absolutely LOVE this poem! You did a great job! :O One thing that I would suggest you is to remove the parenthesis, I think that if you wanna ...

Hi there, Giselle. This is rather creepy. o.0 I feel like this story will have some really strong content. You should rate it. About your writing, I would suggest you ...

Hi Wewein. I'm Solvy and I'm going to review for you. First, Nitpicks: People exclaimed "oh you two are so cute!" People exclaimed , " O h , you two ...

Hi there Vitanilo! I'm here to review for you. xD I really like this. o.o I never thought I could like science fiction, but this is great. One thing I ...

Hellow, Wesley! :) Nice poem you got here. Sad, but it's good. I noticed you kind of forced it to rhyme and sometime you repeated the same word in the ...

Hi there Amelia. I'm here as requested... to review... duh! xD I really like this story. It seemed real and it was entertaining. Now, there is something that kind of ...

HAHAHA! Robin, I love this! I have to say I agree and the end made me laugh. This is brilliant. I love that you mention flees, it gave the poem ...

Hi there, Wesmoc! :) Look at you, all romantic and everything! xD Anyways, I'm here to review... or somethin' like that. Your writing is amazing. This story was so cute, ...

Hi there, LenieLacey. Okay, so I love this, not much people write about their passion for an instrument. This was amazingly worded, I must tell you. Great job! :) Music ...

Hey there, MissBieber. :) I like Biber too. Lol. Anyways, I hate this story. Yus, yus... I do! It's sad, and if I was Cynthia I would be desperate. D8 ...

Okay. I'm o.o here to review. So first off, I gotta say I think you put a lot of work on this poem, like... you didn't sleep or eat three ...

Hi there. :) This poem is so... beautiful. QaraQaraQaradear!!! I love this! I would use punctuation, though... but it's okay like it is, punctuation is not obligatory these days. xD ...

Hi, here to review. :) Okay, so I like this story. It's cool! But there are a few grammar errors. Nitpicks: Blue = should be caps. Red = Add comma/periods, ...

Hey there, poetry. I'm here to review... obviously. xD Okay, the fact that the font's color is orange distracts the reader and it won't let him/her want to read the ...

Hey there, Dramaaaaaaaaa! I'm going to review for you today. I already read the first chapter, I really liked it and this one too. One thing I would say is ...