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Woah! Hi there, Writingneon. Well, first of all this is a kind of strange topic... I kind of liked it, but I didn't... I mean, I like how you wrote ...

Monolith! This is one awesome poem you got here. TRULY BEAUTIFUL: The imagery was great, and the message was clear. Now, I think the only problem here is the punctuation. ...

Hi originalhobbit. First off, I gotta be honest, the first thing that I said after I finished reading was, "Wow!". All the suspense... I don't know, I think this poem ...

Hi there, Robin. :) I read a part of this in your status and I loved it, so I thought I'd come and check it out. Okay, so first off ...

Hi there Ray. :) I'm here to review... or something like that. Okay, truth is that I like the subject of your poem, it's a beautiful message. But everytime I ...

Wow! Deep, short, strong, precise and true! Beautiful, Qaraqaradear. Truly amazing! You've done a shocking job, my friend! :O I love it! By the way, you should tell your friend ...

Hi again, Kattie. I must say you have some great talent. Like good poems, yours flow and to me that's very important, no matter if it rhymes or not. :) ...

Hi there Everett. I don't have much to say, I guess. Lol. Just that the poem would look better with commas. :) But I think you did a good job. ...

Hi there Kattie. :) Okay, quick review here! Red = Add Blue = correct Better to feel pain , Then than to feel nothing at all. I'd rather fail my ...

Hi there, CharifKhedr. First off, I wanna welcome you to YWS! Remember that if you have any questions you can always ask me. Okay, let's get to reviewing... ^_^ Your ...

Hi there, Zwinky. Nice poem, I like it very much. I have some nitpicks for you. :) Its never ending, it's always there, Add an apostrophe: It ' s never ...

Hi there, System. First off, welcome to YWS. Wow, I really love this poem. It has some punctuation problems, but it can be corrected. I love the idea you're bringing! ...

Hi Drama. Here to review as requested. As always I have more nitpicks than anything, but I think you should write about the place where they are at. Use more ...

Hahaha... Hi RebelAnger. I gotta say this poem has a weak start, the opening stanza is kind of cliché. But when I kept on reading, I just loved it! xD ...

Hahahahhaha! Moimow, this is so funny! xD Lol. Good stuff! Something that I would suggest is to write the numbers in letters. And also to place commas, cause you wrote ...