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Hey! CTW!! (IS FINALLY READING YOUR POEM) Than those of a stereotyped teen. Stereotyped is jackin' yo flow homeskillit! How 'bout varying the word length more so it don't look ...

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Hightop here for a quick review! everything single thing that happened. Small spelling error. I was disappointing with the length of this chapter. It's very short, try to lengthen it ...

Hey! Hightop here for a quick review! You have this in general, although it is a narrative poem. Also, is this a love poem? A concerned friend? Try telling us ...

Hey, I'm Hightop, here to review your poem :D The first thing I can say about your poem is that there is almost no flow from line to line. It ...

Hey, you requested me and here I am! So don't have much to add. ChangeTheWorld's review was full of great advice that I would take on board! On my opinion ...

Hey, I'm Hightop, here to do a review! I'm going to do some technical stuff, mainly on spelling, wording, punctuation, spelling and making your essay more formal. These type of ...

Avi! I found one of your poems! Have to review! This is very good! I love the subject if how love can be painful, brutal, yet we need more. A ...

Hey! Hightop here to review on this nice review day! Let's get to it! I've took a person, here and there; That should be "I've taken". Your word choice her ...

Hey! Hightop here to review! First thing I noticed is that this reads very fast, and has a lot of run-ons. Actually, this is only three sentences long. I would ...

Hi! I'm Hightop, here to review! the world is born again in this spring. The world is born again in every spring, is it not? I think "this spring" isn't ...

Requesting reviews? Happy to help my Darling! (I've been reviewing poetry all day so the odd poetic term may pop up xD) as though it were yesterday That's a bit......cliche, ...

Hey Monsters. Hightop here to review your poem! Sometimes society makes bricks into walls. Is this kind of like a personal version of "mountains and molehills". If it is, it ...

Hello StangeLove. I loved your last humorous poem that I read, so I'll review this! :D You were very on point with grammar in this poem. I felt it might ...

Hey DarkNight :D I'm here to review your poem. I switched the genre to fantasy to find it so I'm expecting fantasy! On to review! stanza one Okay a good ...