The Uses of Communication

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Overall ayos ito pre, pero tulad din ng sabi ng iba may mga grammar dito na sumablay pero hindi naman masyado na apektuhan yung idea ng gusto mong sabihin sa essay mo.

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Pako here! I'll try to review this for you.

Overall ayos ito pre, pero tulad din ng sabi ng iba may mga grammar dito na sumablay pero hindi naman masyado na apektuhan yung idea ng gusto mong sabihin sa essay mo.

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A question for the hook has always been okay because it lets the reader think in the first place, but you can also use other types of hooks to give more impact for your essay.

"Having hard time to communicate to other people is one of the most embarrassing moments of one's life." - You can elaborate your idea here so your readers may understand what you meant by that sentence.

"According to the International Schools partnerships in the internet “The Internet as a modern means of communication offers schools many forms and possibilities of mutual exchange. E-mail, Internet forums and platforms allow for rapid communication between the project partners." - You can insert a comma after "the International Schools partnerships in the internet"

"In this generation, modernization in communication is continuously for easier communication." - You can add more words here to complete your thought or you can make it "In this generation, modernization in communication is continuous for easier communication..." then you can widen and give examples of such.

"According to the article "A Total Instant Messages Solution for you Company" in E-mail as a rule for almost everything, while there are advantages, there are also downsides to instant messenger or IMs. The use of E-mails in everyday lives of the people." - In the first sentence, you mentioned that there are "downsides" to instant messenger. This contradicts your topic which is about the uses or advantages of communication. You can omit this sentence because with your topic, i think it is not relevant. In the second sentence, you may add a transitional device to make the flow of your sentences, smoother.

"For businessman it is used for transactions in their business and for student it is used in their projects." - You can make it "businessmen" and "students" to make it agree with the pronoun "their"

"But in has also a disadvantage to some people. For some social people use it frequently like the workers who need to advertise their products all day, they tend to forget that their family is waiting for them." - You mentioned the disadvantages again. You must focus on one angle only throughout the whole article.

You may want to consider a fast look again on your essay to check your grammatical errors and syntax. You may also go back to those sentences where you must have put commas.

Overall, this is a well-thought essay. You just have to focus on one point and organize your thoughts comprehensively.

nice essay,:) your topic was interesting

Your grammar is, what I would call, unique. But despite this, you were able to create a somewhat decent argument. Well, without a doubt, development is far from reaching a halt. With this in mind, do better the next time you write an essay. Good luck.

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Your essay is quite good. Good work

your essay was good. although there are some wrong grammars and spelling but it is okay.

You had a good point, but I agree with the other reviewer that you have grammatical errors in your essay. But then aside from that, your work is easy to understand. You have pointed out your ideas in a very comprehensible way. Some editing and revising can make your essay better. Good luck!

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Good one. Keep it up

Though I see error, your article seems not bad. Btw, thanks for the info. Keep up the good work.

Good job on the essay. Your point was clear, and easy to understand.

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I'm going to do some technical stuff, mainly on spelling, wording, punctuation, spelling and making your essay more formal. These type of essays need to be formal, and written in the passive tense.

Is communication important to people? Yes, communication is important because without it people would find it difficult to communicate with each other. For example, when people have family member abroad, if there is no connection to things like Skype it would be complicated for them to communicate. Having trouble comunicating can be one of the most embarassing times in one's life. Nowadays, communication means a lot to people. According to the International Schools partnerships on the internet “The Internet as a modern means of communication offers schools many forms and possibilities of mutual exchange. E-mail, Internet forums and platforms allow for rapid communication between the project partners. The project partners can communicate via e-mail, chat, speak on the phone or share files and collaborate cheaply and quickly.” People only need a network connection for them to access the world of communication. In this generation, modernization in communication is continuously for easier communication. Through the modernized communication in technology, people can now easily communicate to each other through E-mails, Messages, and Messengers.

According to an article "A Total Instant Messages Solution for you Company" in E-mail as a rule for almost everything, while there are advantages, there are also downsides to instant messenger or IMs. The use of E-mails in everyday lives of the people. E-mail is a communication that can be used through computers. Without it workers and students would have a hard time sending their proposals in work or in schools. For buisnessmen/women it is used for transactions in their business. For student it is used in their projects. It makes the life of people in business and school easier. But it also has disadvantages, according to some people. Some social people use it frequently like workers who need to advertise their products all day.

Messaging is getting more modern every year. Every year it is being improved for people to use it more conveniently. According to Greg Olsen(2009) modernization of messaging in current messaging infrastructures has grown organically over the years, and there are many (often unrealized) opportunities for corporations to reduce operating expenses by re-designing their messaging infrastructure, including: eliminating duplication, unnecessary vendors, simplifying the mail flows and replacing obsolete systems that have accumulated over time. It can be used through [b]gadgets like mobile phones. People use it to communicate to other people even if they are far away. They only need a signal for them to send their messages to other people. Having this kind of communication through mobile phones has a great impact on people. Messaging makes the life of people easier.

Messenger is a kind of communication that you can use through mobile phones, computers, and laptops. According to the article "a total instant messages solution for you company" messenger connects people regardless of where they are actually located. In the company, colleagues can send and reply instant message, in real time without face to face contact, meanwhile the work report can be shared during the instant chat session; the IM can make a virtual conference without needing to get all the related people together in a physical meeting room. It is the easiest way to communicate to other people. Talking with other is the most used way to communicate to others. It is used in social lives to meet new friends on the internet. People can chat through computers and mobile phones using network connection. People need network connection for them to communicate to each other with the use of messengers. These are the ways people can use messenger.

In conclusion, E-mails, Messages, Messengers have their differences in their uses. E-mails are used for business and projects, for workers and for students respectively. Through the modernized communication in technology, people can now easily communicate to each other through E-mails, Messages, and Messengers. Messages are used to communicate with other people in faraway places. Messengers are used for meeting and talking to new people on the internet. But also they have similarities; they can only be used through gadgets like computers, laptops and mobile phones. They also need a connection for them to send what is needed to [b]be sent. With this communication through gadgets make the life of people more convenient.