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  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: Mr. Quirk(Chapter 5)

    Hey there! Thanks a lot for this. I see my mistakes, I like criticism, honestly. To understand the plot, you have to read the previous chapters. I guess u don't ...

    Jul 5, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: Mr. Quirk(Chapter 5)

    Hey! Thank you!

    Jul 5, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: Mr. Quirk(Chapter 4)

    Thanks a lot for this. This was really helpful

    Jul 4, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: Mr. Quirk(Chapter 4)

    Hey! Thanks a lot for this review! Was super helpful

    Jul 4, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: In Earth’s Defense: Prologue

    My grammar too is awful...

    Jul 3, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: Mr. Quirk(Chapter 3)

    I agree. Things really seem a bit too rushed. I have got to work on that. Thanks a lot for the review!

    Jul 3, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Horror Re: Mr. Quirk(Chapter 2)

    Hey! Thanks a lot and it was as useful as your reviews always are!%u263A%uFE0F

    Jul 3, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: In Earth’s Defense: Prologue

    I will be reviewing this soon. The pics are cool tho.😇

    Jul 3, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: Mr. Quirk(Chapter 1)

    Hey thanks a lot for this! Glad that u liked it

    Jul 3, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: Mr. Quirk(Chapter 3)

    Thanks a lot for this. I will surely work on the environment building and also the dialogues. Again, thanks a lot for this

    Jul 3, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: Mr. Quirk(Chapter 1)

    Hey! Thanks a lot for the review! It was very helpful.

    Jul 1, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: Mr. Quirk(Chapter 1)

    Glad that you liked it Alice! I intentionally made the chapters short so it's a bit easy to review and also it will be easy for me to modify. I ...

    Jun 30, 2021
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Winter

    Oh I see. Great

    Jun 21, 2021
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Who Do I cry for?

    First of all, it was not based on personal experience. Secondly, this is the reason I love YWS. U know what I am a person who writes things without really ...

    Jun 19, 2021
  • Poetry » Horror, Lyrical Re: The nature's feelings and tragedy

    *rhyming

    Jun 7, 2021


I just write poetry to throw my mean callous heartless exterior into sharp relief. I’m going to throw you off the ship anyway.
— Vogon Captain (The Hitchhiker’s Guide to the Galaxy)