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Re: How Can I? (NaPo Poem #1)
Hello tuckster!!! Here for a review. I really wanted to drop a review and what I think about it. Well, to tell the truth, I guess I am a believer ...
Apr 5, 2021 -
Re: you hide bones under your bed, i hide them in my words.
Hello chi!! You are an awesome author! And your poems are like better than the each previous one. The same goes for this one. Your descriptions, imagery– all were just ...
Apr 5, 2021 -
Re: The opposite of happy
Hello fireeyes!! Here for a review. This will be very short becuz I don't have much to suggest! Nitpicks: We often overlook anger as a Triade of these emotions. I ...
Apr 5, 2021 -
Re: The Story Of An Introvert-1
Hello! Here for a review! Before reading: Although I like reading short chapters, but I guess this was too short to be a prologue. After reading: This was not bad ...
Apr 5, 2021 -
Re: I'm Insane
Hello!! Here for a review!!! I guess it's the first work of yours I am reviewing! Nitpicks: Tell me everything I've done, and tell if their weird Don't you think ...
Apr 5, 2021 -
Re: Redeamed Chapter 1.1
Hello!! Here for a review!!! The assassin glanced warily around. Faces, millions of different faces pleading, scared. They circled Verena, slowly pushing forward toward where she seemed to float. All ...
Apr 4, 2021 -
Re: named for the heavens
Hello mage! Here for a review. Well, I don't have words to describe or express my feelings. It hit me hard inside my heart which made me feel like what ...
Apr 4, 2021 -
Re: The Dandelion
Hello!!! Here for a review!!! Nitpicks: The Dandelion flows to and fro To and fro First of all, it's repetitive. Although repetition sounds good in many poems, but here it ...
Apr 4, 2021 -
Re: your heart at its most vulnerable state
Hello chi!!! Your poem shined like you as usual. You nailed it!!!! It hit me hard!! It described how our hearts are broken and we are still trying to connect ...
Apr 4, 2021 -
Re: Brave Against a Beast
Hello!!! Here for a review! But you know You'll all escape together I suggest making a little change in the second line. You all will escape together. I guess it ...
Apr 4, 2021 -
Re: Project Oblivious - Ch 2
Hello!! Here for a review. First, all I see is black. Then, stars. Then, her. She has dark, curly, shoulder length hair that hides her face. As we both straighten ...
Apr 4, 2021 -
Re: Project Oblivious
Hello!! Here for a review!!! I smile to myself as I step into the teen section of the public library. I'm immediately relaxed, my shoulders dropping from my ears, my ...
Apr 3, 2021 -
Re: Warmth
Hello!!!! You people did a wonderful job in collabing the whole poem!! I really liked how you described the warmth! What you people said is kinda a inner warmth. And ...
Apr 3, 2021 -
Re: 'FORGOTTEN' Ch-0 #Prologue
Helllloooo!!! Welcome to YWS and here for a review. I really like short chapters and the same applies for you. Nam goong min has long lost his child. It was ...
Apr 3, 2021 -
Re: "Character"
Helllo!!!! Here for a review!! The snap of the tape as she pulled it taught and ripped it, the jagged edge leaving what her girlfriend Pippa called “character.” I couldn't ...
Apr 3, 2021