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Heyyy! Here for a review!!! My betrothed is waiting. He's kind no doubt, but I don't wish to fall in love with someone that hand-picked. Put a comma after kind. ...

Hey! forever here for a review! At last I have reached this chapter. So, let's get to the review. Ethan woke up at the time of dawn, the golden rays ...

Hey! Forever Here for a very short review! Things I liked and also a few suggestions. Just distingush between them,clearly stated tho. A burst of light so close I feel ...

Hey! Here for a review!! The soulless body of Opa was lying on the very barren ground of Sunwane, where his wife was long buried. He really was gone far ...

Hey! Forever here for a very short review! Here we have an awesome poem. It's short, simple but wonderful in its own terms. I loved it. It tells us a ...

Hey Alice! Forever Here for a review. First of all, the title is grammatically wrong. It should be 'Someone has gone far now' If you don't want to change the ...

Hey! Forever here for a review!! The three sat still on the bed. They were silent, too shocked to say anything. How can they leave Sunwane? It sounded like a ...

Hey! Forever here for a review! I review paragraphs by paragraphs. Carole Williams loved science. It had been a passion of hers ever since she was a little child. She’d ...

Hey there! Here for a review! Let me start with the formatting. Why did u format like that? My brain can't find a reason for your formatting but if you ...

Hey! Forever here for a review! Almost everybody has a life-changing incident. An event after your life takes a different path. This incident or accident may have a good or ...

Hey Alice! Forever here for a review! After a moment, when Lyla's anger subsided, she explained "I couldn't hear what they were talking about, as they were far away and ...

Hey! Here for a short review! I feel like I m watching from a window. I m not living my life; I m just a spectator. I can see the ...

Hey Alice! Forever here for a review! It's been an epoch since I read the last part. Whatever, let's get straight to the review! First of all, it was awesome ...

Hey there! Forever here for a review! I feel pity for both Ivan OrKry and the people. Let's get to the review. I didn't really understand what the formatting is ...

Hey! Forever here for a review! This poem was amazing. It can't be called simple because I had to read it more than 10 times to get the meaning and ...