Hey there! Here for a review!
Let me start with the formatting. Why did u format like that? My brain can't find a reason for your formatting but if you have it, please provide me with the reason. Then, I would be able to say if it fits in here.
Now, coming to your content. It's a bit vague. Most importantly, I can't find any link between the titlw and the piece. I don't know if it's a chapter or a part of a larger writing , but I guess so.
Next, your writing starts with a quotation but it doesn't end with one. Fix that.
Your writing sets a good mood. A very tranquil peace it gives upon me, as I can feel it. It gives an image of the very busy life of nowadays and how people can't get one minute free time. How ppl lives are getting stress with no time for them. It tells how ppl don't feel or rather understand the significance of giving them some time of their own.
Overall, a very good one. And I guess it has some other part, if yes, then tag me when u release it. Keep writing!
~Forever
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