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Hi there. Rebel to review. :) This is a neat start to your novel. Since I'm a nerd when it comes to astronomy, I was drawn into the book when ...

Hi there. Rebel here. :) I enjoyed your short story. I could appreciate the descriptions that you wrote, and a picture was painted in my mind. Kudos to you on ...

Hey there. Rebel's here to review your short story. :) I must admit, I was blown away by this piece. I really liked how you wrote in future tense, as ...

Hi there. Rebel to comment on your story. You said in the description that you wanted the reader's initial reaction, correct? So, I'll give you my initial reaction. The beginning ...

Hello. :) I really enjoyed your poem. Was your structure the greatest? No, not really. But I think the odd structure is part of what makes the poem. It's unique, ...

Hey there. Rebel's commenting on your lovely poem. :) I enjoyed your poem. I pictured this beautiful, grand beach at night when I began reading your poem. Nice imagery. Now ...

Hi there. Rebel here to comment on your story. To begin with, I really enjoyed the epilogue. A little short, but that doesn't matter. I have one little itsy-bitsy grammar ...

This is an interesting poem. I enjoy how you put two opposing sides. I believe that you meshed them together well, and not many people put two sides to their ...

I enjoyed this chapter. We finally get to meet Mrs. May. (: Let's start with things to improve on. I noticed just two things that I would've changed. Ex 1: ...

Hi there. (: I enjoy the concept of your story & where it's heading. I think you have an interesting plot. You definitely took me back to when I was ...

This is really sweet. ❤ The flow of this poem is overall very nice. Well done with that. I like your metaphor 'Lay in bed, soft like petals of a ...

I feel like you're writing about my neighbors... :P This is so funny! You put a smile on my face once I began reading about Myrdie (love her name) and ...

Hey therealme! (: Nice work so far! Let me just say that you are one of the descriptive authors that I've seen. You've painted a really vivid and clear picture ...

I think this a perfect start to this book. You should definitely continue it. (: What you've described about NOVA, it makes me want to know more. Nicely done with ...

I enjoyed this poem. I think that this is what most people tend to think of when they think of their mothers. Just two typos: one in the first line ...