Flower~Child

Ok, I liked these. I think that you did a very good job of trying to show what both people would be thinking. I don't believe what you said, but ...

I really like this. I can get the feel of what you felt when you wrote this. I think it could give a little story behind it though. Like why ...

Ok, review time my dear! Short and simple isn't my style but I will do my best to review. First of all in the third line you misspelled ripped, and ...

Ok, I like this. It is really short though, it seems just a beggining to me. It has no story why are you alone, why doesn't anyone care? If it ...

Ok, review time haha. I to am a Christian and we have no problem with dating, or kissing, and a true friend wouldn't say break up with him or I'm ...

I agree with the other review, but I really like this. I think that it was a little long and most readers wont read something that is this long because ...

I think I must be confused, but as far as poetry goes let me review. I think that it rymed at first but it lost that in like the third ...

I really like this, but I have liked others better. Not to be the mean reviewer haha. It got stronger as it went on and I liked that but in ...

All American poet here at your service...haha ok lets not go that far, but anyway. Ok, so I liked it I understood it, but it didn't stand out. I see ...

I think when you write a poem that you have to have feeling. Not knowing what it's like to be emo means it's hard for you to write about it. ...

It took me a couple of times reading this to understand it. It didn't flow very well in several places so I had a hard time following it. I think ...

HEART OF A POET Melvin Banggollay Many woman said, they don't like a poet For they didn't mean what they had said For having tongues with magical wand s That ...

Ok I agree with empress. Some of the words are just one word, and there are a few minor errors. I don't like how you kept saying who was talking ...

Ok, review time. I like this, but it seems to be a little rushed. I think that if you make it a little slower, and capture more of the feelings ...

I like the simpicity in this, but I do think that you left out part of the story. You see that the person is really upset about something, but what? ...