FlamingPhoenix

I'm glad! You shouldn't get discouraged your writing is amazing!

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Okay great!

Lol that's fine, I'm glad my review made you happy, if i am rude in anyway I would love it if you told me, because I don't want to come ...

I really wanted to bring across that when Viper is in a dangerous place he doesn't hold back, I kind of want it to be like his all kind and ...

That's a very good point to be honest I never thought of them not being used to flying in the rain, I'll try and make things like that more clear ...

Again thank you so much for the review, all these questions you have now will be answered in later chapters.

Thank you so much for the wonderful review!!

Your welcome!!! *Hugs back*

Thank you so much for the wonderful review!!

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Thanks for the review!!! It's go read over this chapter and edit it up a little more!

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Well when Jason opened the door to let Oscar in you didn't really tell us what he looked like. What is his hair color and eye color, stuff like that.