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Re: Damocles Does Not Rise
Hi! FlamingPhoenix here with a review for you on this lovely day and to help get your work out the green room for you! Okay let's start. So this story ...
Sep 27, 2019 -
Re: Assignment: Rebirth 1.1
Hi! FlamingPhoenix here to drop off a review for you on this lovely day! So I think everyone else has done a great job pointing out all the things that ...
Sep 26, 2019 -
Re: falling in a forest
Hello! FlamingPhoenix dropping in with a short review for you Mage! ;) Let's get started. It's a little sad that forest didn't rhyme with around, undergrowth and sound, it just ...
Sep 25, 2019 -
Re: Lost
Hi! FlamingPhoenix here with a short review for you on this lovely day! Okay let's get to it. So I couldn't see anything wrong with this poem other than the ...
Sep 25, 2019 -
Re: Hometown (Revised)
Hello Blue! FlamingPhoenix here with a review for you on this lovely day, and to help polish this up. May I start this review by saying this is such an ...
Sep 24, 2019 -
Re: Turn To The Light
Hello, Alli and Doss. FlamingPhoenix here to drop off a review for you guys on this lovely day, and to help get your work out the green room, and of ...
Sep 23, 2019 -
Re: Broken Records
Hello! FlamingPhoenix here to drop off a review for you on this lovely night! And to hep get your work out of the green room for you, and to help ...
Sep 22, 2019 -
Re: Umbrellas in the Rain
Hello! FlamingPhoenix here with a review for you on this lovely day, and to tell you what I thought of your work! So let's get to the review! So I ...
Sep 22, 2019 -
Re: Emperor's Heir - Chapter 26
Hello Shied my writing friend! FlamingPhoenix here like always to drop off a very much urned review on this lovely day, and to help get your work out the green ...
Sep 20, 2019 -
Re: Rising Just To Fall
Hello. FlamingPhoenix here with a review for you on this very cold day and to help get your work out the green room for you! Okay let's begin. I couldn't ...
Sep 19, 2019 -
Re: Men Without Women: Q's Story
Hello! FlamingPhoenix here to drop of a short review for you on this lovely rainy night! And yo help get your work out the green room! So I would like ...
Sep 18, 2019 -
Re: Presently Absent
Hello FlamingPhoenix here with a review for you on this lovely day and to help get your work out the green room for you! Okay let's begin. I didn't see ...
Sep 17, 2019 -
Re: Y.W.S.
Hello my writing friend! FlamiingPhoenix here with a review for you on this lovely day, and to help polish up you work! Let's get right to it shall we? So ...
Sep 17, 2019 -
Re: Snippet of future story
Hello FlamingPhoenix here with a review for you on this lovely night, and to help get your work out the green room, and to help you with your idea for ...
Sep 16, 2019 -
Re: Coming Home
Hello my dear friend, FlamingPhoenix here with a review for you on this lovely day and to help get your work out the green room for you. Okay let's begin. ...
Sep 15, 2019