FlamingHomosexual

WOW! I’m speechless, this was amazing. But I’m gonna give you an actual review, or atleast try to! First of all, the story is beautiful. Thank you for sharing it ...

Heya, I’m Ari. :) I’ll review your poem for yah :D. First off, LOVE the font. I’ve never been able to figure out how to do different fonts on here, ...

Hellooooo! I have a nice review for you! First off, I have no idea what I’m reading, haha! As a reader, I could use more background information to make sense ...

Hey! I know you already have quite a few reviews, but here is another one! First off, this poem would be a lot better if it were broken up into ...

Greetings! I’m gonna write you a little review. First thing, though kinda nit-picky, is that you really don’t need the “so” in the beginning of this poem. Also, I really ...

Greetings, darling! A nice review is coming your way! :D First thing I need to say, just so it isn’t sitting in the back of my mind, is that you ...

Hey! I’ve got a review for you! I really loved your story, I thought it was a nice story with some hidden symbolism. Also, the message of putting yourself fear ...

This poem reminds me of someone I used to know...hmm... May I ask what inspired it? Also, I’m gonna write a quick review. Narrative poem! I love narrative poetry, and ...

Is there an artistic purpose of having two poems in one here? Or did you not have enough points for two separate ones? Nothing wrong with that, just asking. Also, ...

From what I’ve seen from you so far, you are an amazing writer! Also, imma write you a quick (and awkward) review. To get the bad out of the way, ...

Hello there. I like your idea, reminds me of Avatar, The Last Airbender. But there are quite a few issues I have with this. First of all, transition. How did ...

Question, where are the different parts of a song? Like, the chorus, bridge, etc... If we are getting real technical, I find this song lacking. Then again, I listen to ...

Hiya, I’m new so please forgive me if this is awkward. Er, love the energy of the whole piece. Really nice, especially around spooky season. You are really great at ...

This looks like something I’d find in a spiritual poetry book. I love your use of an extended vocabulary, and the italics really give it some style. I’m very spiritual ...