FireSpyGirl

Hi there! So this is a very interesting story. You have a really good plot, a good theme and you wrote this really well. The perfect amount of emotion in ...

Hi there! This poem is so beautiful and so sad! I love the way you wrote this, I truly do. I understand what you are going through, and what you ...

Hi there! Another interesting chapter!! I am definitely hooked and can't wait for more! There is only one sentence that needs some work, and that is this one: " reaching ...

I love this! This hits me personally, as I have often felt this, but could never seem to put it into words. Everyone has a place though, and I know ...

This hit me so hard! If I could, I would give you a hug. I know how you feel, and this poem...I'm crying for you. I hope I can help ...

Hi there. Okay, first off, I am shaking with laughter!! This is a great success! I just read it to my mom and we are both laughing! This isn't going ...

Amazing and beautiful! This speaks right to the heart of the reader, and it definitely hit me. I'm sorry you feel this way, and I hope with all my being ...

So beautiful and so true! I have been through this before, and believe me, it is possible to break free. I just want you to know that you can PM ...

Hi there! I am going to jump right into this review! So, first off, this is a good poem, and very relatable. I am sorry you go through this, I ...

I love this! I get the feeling that you love Shakespeare as much as I do! XD. I read it and watch it and listen to it daily. I love ...

Hi there and welcome to YWS!! I hope you enjoy it here! So this is interesting, and very true. I don't have anything to offer, because to me, you did ...

*screams* This is awesome!! I don't have any suggestions or sentences to point out because I didn't notice any. Nice cliffhanger though! So, Clandestine has found Matt, but so has ...

Hi there! Another interesting chapter! :). I really hope she finds Matt, because I really want to see who he really is! Now I just found a few sentences that ...

Hi there! Another great chapter! I have only a few pointers and then I'll be out! First: "He bowed his head in respect his horns catching the light of the ...

Hello! Very interesting! I think that this story is actually really, really good! I do think that it could use a little more content in the first part, a little ...