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Re: Affinity 3.4 Girl
Hi. I wanted to say that ever since I was younger my favorite name has been Avery. I know that Avery can be a girls or boys name, but I ...
Jan 24, 2015 -
Re: Affinity 3.3 Girl
Hiya! FireeeeBirrrrddddd99999 here for a review! I'm just going to drop right into the nitpicks, for I am quite sure you already know how much I love this novel =). ...
Jan 24, 2015 -
Re: Affinity 3.2 Girl
Hi! FireBird99 here for a review{Once again}. My only question is....what in the world is going on?!? You bug me because you have peaked my curiosity immensely. I am tempted ...
Jan 20, 2015 -
Re: Affinity 3.1 Girl
Hi! I think I'm on an Affinity review kick. Haha. I liked this chapter BUT in the beginning I thought it was still the guy....until you started describing the guy. ...
Jan 20, 2015 -
Re: Affinity 2.2 Boy
Hey! Me again. I bet your sick of me, eh? XD This is my favorite chapter. It was really well paced and even. The Tiger woman reminds me of that ...
Jan 20, 2015 -
Re: Affinity 2.1 Boy
Hey! FireBird99 here to review your already perfect work. Tell me something, how can I nit pick at your work? There is nothing to nitpick at! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Jan 20, 2015 -
Re: Affinity 1.0 Boy
Hey! FireBird99 here for a review. It looks like you have had some amazing reviewers haha. Lucky you XD. There were a few small nitpicks I noticed. [quote]For the next ...
Jan 18, 2015 -
Re: The Blood of the Martyrs Chapter 1
Hi! FireBird99 here for a review! This was an amazing piece of work. There were a few things that would require nitpicks but I see that they were already corrected ...
Jan 16, 2015 -
Re: Tale of the Tongues: Chapter 1:Awakening
Hey! FireBird99 here for a review. I am going to take a wild guess and say that this is fan fiction of the video game Skyrim. Am I right, am ...
Jan 16, 2015 -
Re: Thorns Of Destiny - Chapter Two
Hey! Your first chapter was so good I'm back for the next! Again, this is amazing so there will be few corrections. Never mind there are no corrections. Only compliments ...
Jan 16, 2015 -
Re: Thorns Of Destiny - Chapter One
Hey! FireBird99 here for a review! Love the novel so far by the way=) Okay just a few little nitpicks I found. Haha when people review my work I get ...
Jan 16, 2015 -
Re: Death's Warrior Chapter 2 (Part 1)
This was awesome. I like how you showed a bit of background story of the King. Very interesting! This time I do have one nit pick. You said here: She ...
Dec 25, 2014 -
Re: Death's Warrior Chapter 1
I finally got around to reading your amazingly, well written book! Sorry for taking forever, especially since you have read pretty well every one of my chapters. I am starting ...
Dec 25, 2014 -
Re: Here I am
This was also an amazing piece of work. So was this poem inspired by your life? If so I am so happy that you found a good home. I like ...
Dec 17, 2014 -
Re: Dad
This poem was truly sad. I cannot relate to it at all because I am growing up in a house full of love, but I know many people out there ...
Dec 17, 2014
