FiguringOutLife

Ok so this poem had AWESOME imagery. As you took me through the lines, a picture formed in my head. From the words you used, like bursting, cracked and creaked, ...

I really enjoyed this. It has a lot of symbols and different imagery in it, which made me think while reading. That's the best type of poetry for me, because ...

That was really deep and nice to read. I really enjoyed it! Some suggestions - or a sound I feel like you should elaborate on this line, or get rid ...

Few things I noticed going through - She's hopelessly in love with him, but she feels as if he doesn't even notice her. - I think the 'even' isn't necessary. ...

This was really enjoyable to read! It made me think, and I love poetry that does that. One thing I loved was your rhyming scheme. It flowed so well, even ...

Aw this was a very nice read. It brightened up my day :) I love how you drew the connection between the lighting bugs and fireworks. I've never thought of ...

This is really well written, and a joy to read! I loved how you put all the imagery into this, it clearly painted a picture in my mind. I absolutely ...

Nitpicks first! When you see her She looks perfectly normal. Little do you know She struggles day in And day out with a disease. I would add a comma after ...

This was awesome! Dark and meaningful, my favorite :) Just a few nitpicks I saw- Sitting here alongside you in this gloomy room, the frigid air settles like clouds, drifting ...

Hello there! I'll start off with some grammar and nitpicky stuff. At the beginning, I think you should narrow down the spacing just a bit. I like how you have ...

Very nice prologue! It definitely leaves the reader with a sense of mystery, and want to read more. So here are just a few things I saw. As I began ...

Wowzers. I have attempted to write what I just read, and it's never been that amazing, nor has it perfectly described the way I sometimes feel. Very well done on ...

Aw, this was super sweet! It made me smile :) So here's just a few things I saw. There wasn't many, but this is what I noticed. "You can't leave ...

Hey there! So this was an interesting poem, something I haven't seen before. I liked that new perspective it gave me. I also felt like I went on the emotional ...

Wow, I really really enjoyed this. I read it like three times! Very good. I feel like it's really deep, and can be interpreted in many different ways. For me, ...