Fatima

Love the girl's part. She is so awesome :O. Keep writing! loved it :3.

You, are a genius. Mind blown. Perfect.

Heyy!! This has been a true pleasure to read :3. " I can’t feel anything anymore, my body falls numb, unattractive, unresponsive. Everything is shutting down. I finally learn the ...

A really moving piece, in such short, precise manner xD. Loved it. Possibly one of my recent favorites' on YWS. Hoping to read more from you.

meh.

The next morning I'll fly off to a new place, a new city, a new campus with new people but no friends -not yet. 14 years of trying to be ...

Dies. Awesomesauce. Sorry for not giving constructive reviews, cause 'm just me like that :p

don't think romance is your forte :P. But still, the last time, ever. “I had a dream, a dream that we grow old together, Lara.” was good :P.

I love this. I can't believe you could describe it this well. Excellent piece. Fantastic work (Y) !!

love love love love love love it:D:D:D

It isn't about the weight of matter being spoken. It's about being heard. this truly applies to this writing. simplistic, yet carries strength and deep meaning.

awesome:D! it has a revolutionary, rebillon feeling too it, without getting excessively dramatic. you managed to make it intence and compulsive in very few words. great:D!

i loved your decription. but it was lacking the underlying emotion, the feeling i usually get when i read poetry. it seemed a bit too bland. but i'm positive you ...

it's nice, but nothing clearly amazing. this is a topic everyone writes about, and to make a stand in this area, you have to be really epic. better luck next ...

i didn't find any gramatic errors but this seemed too simple to be your writing. i'm not pointing it out as a flow it just seemed to lack *lumi factor*. ...