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I once had a friend, who all ways told me the truth. [all ways = always*] I once had a friend who, looked deep into my eyes. [no comma after ...

the slurred phonetics of a flickering lightbulb hung like guilt over our heads and sent our shadows screeching across windowpanes and vacant voids disguised as mouths. silence crossed the floorboards ...

All the worlds touch Here in the quiet, in the smell of paper All the worlds touch All the worlds breathe Here where the brightly colored spines go dancing All ...

I forgot how much I loved Phasmatis and Gleebeck. Or Phazzy and Gleeb, I should say. You're never going to forgive me for giving them those nicknames, are you? :lol: ...

Hello, my love. Look! I'm reading! And reviewing! I'm no longer the world's worst girlfriend! YAY! First of all... Gleebeck's a murderer?! When did I miss this?! *plots* Oh, I ...

This... makes no sense. None at all, actually, unless you've really f*cked up your punctuation. "Courtly to dishonor?" What? Unless you're saying that it's "courtly to dishonor/A fief of fond ...

Well, it's not as bad as a lot of the tripe in the forums these days. Unfortunately, it's also definitely not the best--or even close--that I've seen on this site. ...

Dear Alanna, When I first saw this poem, I decided that instead of skipping over it automatically, as I normally would with this sort of tripe, I would at least ...

I won't lie. I read the chapter on apostrophes three times before moving on to the rest of the book, just because I enjoyed it so much. *headdesk* I truly ...

Hullo, Kat! On the whole I liked this; it was pithy, but showed quite a lot. I do have some con-crits for you. ;) In the lineup, some look soft ...

I'll agree with the above... the first poem is much better. A pretty little glimpse into a situation and a juncture in time... and well worded! The second one I ...

Gorgeous, Tony. Perfectly gorgeous. Only one question... And I pray that your days pays well ...should that be "And I pray that your day pays well," or "And I pray ...

All right, boys... break it up. As Dono said, Adam, if you have problems like this, you should contact people who can properly address them. That aside... JC, as has ...

Oh, Tony. One of these days I'm going to get on a bus, come see you, and smack you once for every time you tell me you're an awful poet. ...

I'll preface this by saying that I'm not a huge fan of vampire-centric stories, or... well... vampires in general, actually. I will follow that up by saying that if you ...