FancyDragon

HAHAHA love it!!

FacyDragon here! Hey sorry if i sounded mad i did not mean, too. Dx I like you and your writing! Any way on to the review!!!! no matter you are ...

Weeeeeeeeeeeeeell then interesting story. you used a lot of he said she saids. you might want to cut that down you don't need it, it makes your work less engaging. ...

Okay at first i did not understand the title but know i think i get it. It's you saying what you don't want but do want and how you are ...

WOW WOOOOOOOOW DAAAAAAMN So much emotion leaking off of the words! The venom in the beginning hahaha. The words a beautifully depressing! I love it the words flow together wonderfuly! ...

This was an amazing poem very insightful and deep swirling with great imagery. I liked how you broke up your verses. great word choices. There where many lines that i ...

It's interesting very nice. It is well written and the format is cool. there are a lot of lines i liked in this work. liiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiike!!!!!!! The lonesome whistle in the ...

All i have to say is wow Haha no i like the twist on your traditional Christmas story/poem. it was well written it was cute in a cometic kind of ...

Hahaha Dragon here *Fancy rage quite* haha My turn to review you tag you're it!! Well its a very well written ice filled with many different emotions. i liked the ...

Dragon here Fancy took a break today. Your poem was lovely. you can feel, hear, and imagine the pain and the situation you are writing in. I do think if ...

Heyyyyy Fancy here! Your work was nice i do think if you added more detail in this is might drive home the emotions that you're trying to get a cross ...

hy replace a flicker of hope With a squash of a dream? These lines are a bit weird sounding I should’ve known we had lost the connection, When you said ...

I don't know what it is but there is something choppy about this poem. not trying to be rude but maybe read through it and see if you can find ...

Uhm this was a bit hard to fallow . maybe you can try to be more descriptive or explain a tiny bit more. The thoughts were a bit scattered. and ...

This is very good. there are some weird words and phrases but over all you did a great job! I loved a few of your lines. i really liked this ...