Fall_Into_The_Sky

I was both laughing at and stunned by this line: “ Yes, this is the principal of your daughter’s new school…she is dead right now. A Bus hit her. Goodbye.” ...

I'm not usually into reading gay stories.. but this is a good story. Waiting for more

I like the title actually. I love that song! Lesson to learn : * Don't toy with peoples emotions... they bite back!

This is a beautiful story. Keep it up :)

Always brilliant. I love how they care for each other in such a short time. How he gives her her privacy, and keeps bounds... enventhough we all know he could ...

I simply love this story. Can't wait for more.

Hmm i liked this

its a good beginning but as everyone said confusing

You really need to translate this. I had to use an online translator to read it. I know some spanish, but it is just too hard to read. I didn't ...

One word more Also the characters seem older. Especially because of the passionate kiss.. How old r they 13 ... 14?

Preety interesting topic. I've never heard of Morgan le Fay.

Wow! This is very well written. I love the ending. I can just picture her fading away only moments after their lips have touched.

I liked it. Would love it to be a bit longer though. Keep up the good work!

I agree with the repitition of You. It kind of threw the poem off. Rewrite it a bit. Other than that it's preety good.

Good poem... It just needs to be written a little differently so that we can visualize him.