FLyerS

I had no problems with the plot of the story, but keep working on the English!

You are such a good writer. I have a challenge for you. Write something happy!

Wow. That be powerful stuff. You should watch form though. This is a narrative, not a poem. Technically.

I don't usually go for country songs, but this was... good. I say that grudgingly because I don't like country. From a purely literary standpoint, I liked the end, with ...

I thought your comparison of poetry and dancing was excellent. Dancer's poetry is in movement, not sound. Flow was good, and so was texture. (my word for: the feel of ...

A nice poem,the topic is over used, but I can deal... The flow was tripping, but I think that in this case that added to the sweetness. Just a little ...

Good topic. You need to work on the rhythm and meter.

very ok. You started out with a tired old theme, then you changed it to something slightly less tired. Overall, I liked your wording, but you need to pick a ...

Awwwwww! So CUTE!

I love your imagery here. SO COOL. Especially the French at the end. I love French.

I likes it i likes it. Very good. Love the last line :smt089 so true.

Very good!

Very cool.

All 'typos' are purposeful. They create hidden meaning.

Hey! Uh, I like it, but cut the entire first bit. Yeah, all of it. Those four little lines are Brilliant. Dat's all you need, chicka bee. Oh, Itsallme_2003, aren't ...