FLyerS

This is a poem. Technically. I want you to do something for me. Read "Annabell Lee" by Poe. Now I don't expect you to be as good a Poe, but ...

Ok. Just so you know, I hate love poems. Hate them with a burning passion. Love poems suck up a writers time and energy, and when they are complete, they ...

Ah, the beauty of my land surpasses even that of heaven. I live on the mountains so I can see so many wonders. If there were no such thing as ...

Well, from a purely form-oriented standpoint, that was not a poem. It was a story. But once you get to reading it, you can see poetic elements in it. No ...

That is so... Empowering. I loved it. The way you said the Can you hear me now was just a little repetitive, but not enough to detract from the poem. ...

I liked the title. The incorrect grammar of the title was endearing. I hope you know, behavior like that with an actual girl will get you shanked by her girlfriends, ...

The way you made the outside world look over the mother-not-to-be is both detracting and appealing. It is good the first and last times were well written, but the middle ...

This is definitely a beginning to a story. Some of the grammar is weird, you call things different names... I don't know... Are you from India? that would explain the ...

This poem is redundant. :smt102 I'm sorry, but you need to do something else besides restating what you already said in reverse order. "The sky is blue Blue is the ...

CLICHED!!! RE-A-LY CLICHED. Love poems are always cliched. Revenge is also cliched. Use more metaphors. WAY more metaphors. I mean it. Finding the right words for love is almost impossible ...

I thought the first line was cliched, but the flow was good. I enjoyed this poem, but the last stanzas were odd. Not bad, just odd. They added to the ...

I wish you could find something better to talk about than love. Love found. Love lost. Love taken. Love given. Love forbidden. Love ignored. I am tired of "love" as ...

Good poem. I like it when people don't use love as a crutch. Good job on the topic. In my opinion, you should change little words here: "One thing’s for ...

NASTY NITPICKS are always first. So, here goes. I love to love the things I hate But to hate the things I love, Would be a lie to my heart ...

First of, THE NASTY NITPICKINGS :twisted: those with weak constitutions should leave the arena. Every time I try and pictures your faces? Picture not pictures. Stil don’t; Two 'l's count ...