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Re: Dreaded memory- Contest entry
Hey! I've never heard of that song before. As for your poem though, I enjoyed it. I liked the emotion and especially your word choice, like the bit about the ...
Jul 8, 2011 -
Re: Flawless
Hey there! Here as requested, sorry it's taken me so long. I'm thoroughly out of practice in both writing and reviewing poetry, so forgive me if I'm not very helpful. ...
Jul 8, 2011 -
Re: Booty Shorts
Oh my God, haha. I don't feel that I can give this a legitimate review, as I enjoyed it far to too much. It made me laugh, it had great ...
Jun 14, 2011 -
Re: On Rowboats and Trees
Hello. So I really enjoyed this. The imagery and tone of this poem are superb. You have a talent for combining words in ways that portray strong emotions. For example: ...
Jun 9, 2011 -
Re: Wake up
Hello! I really like the imagery and the strong words that you used in your poem, like "dragged" and "turmoil". Your words were interesting and created a strong feeling throughout ...
Jun 5, 2011 -
Re: Freckles
Lileh! Please forgive, I'm so rusty with both poetry and reviewing, but I'll do my very best. I’ve been trying all night to kiss away your freckles D'aww! with every ...
Jun 5, 2011 -
Re: I wander here
Hey! You get my first review since January, so please bear with me if it isn't too good. I don't like the intro part. A good poem should stand on ...
Jun 5, 2011 -
Re: Winter Bloom [edited yet again]
Hello Meep! Let me start by saying that I thought this was absolutely adorable. It accurately describes the way a young person - especially a boy, I feel - loves ...
Dec 14, 2010 -
Re: Sorry
This isn't exactly a poem. Stringing words together With breaks in between Does not make for a poem. A poem must have rhythm, structure, creative language. Similes, metaphores, imagery. All ...
Nov 11, 2010 -
Re: Around the world: America to Poland
Hi there! So I was attracted to your title because I'm Polish. =] Just because I might not write every word write. The second write should be right. I was ...
Nov 11, 2010 -
Re: Monster
So the others already touched upon the spelling/grammar errors, so I won't bother to reiterate that. Your poem had nice flow and rhythm, and you actually stayed consistant to your ...
Oct 23, 2010 -
Re: Poison
This is actually pretty good. If you hadn't said that you don't write poetry, I would have never guessed. I didn't find anything wrong with your word choice or grammar. ...
Oct 17, 2010 -
Re: Instruction Guide to the Crazy
Hi there. This was cute. ^^ I enjoyed it. Never rhyme rhyme with time, Because it's cliché, Well, that's what I say, And neva rite wit korekt gramer or punctuation, ...
Oct 1, 2010 -
Re: All of Us.
Hi StreetRat. Your poem was well-written and well-structured. A little too cynical for my taste, but good regardless. It's true, it's honest, and it's thoughtful. Not many poets achieve that, ...
Jun 5, 2010 -
Re: .
Hi Rosey! Nitpicks first. I only noticed two small spelling mistakes: No mater how much I used this spell, it still drained me. Matter My master came up to me ...
May 2, 2010
