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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Dreaded memory- Contest entry

    Hey! I've never heard of that song before. As for your poem though, I enjoyed it. I liked the emotion and especially your word choice, like the bit about the ...

    Jul 8, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Flawless

    Hey there! Here as requested, sorry it's taken me so long. I'm thoroughly out of practice in both writing and reviewing poetry, so forgive me if I'm not very helpful. ...

    Jul 8, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Booty Shorts

    Oh my God, haha. I don't feel that I can give this a legitimate review, as I enjoyed it far to too much. It made me laugh, it had great ...

    Jun 14, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: On Rowboats and Trees

    Hello. So I really enjoyed this. The imagery and tone of this poem are superb. You have a talent for combining words in ways that portray strong emotions. For example: ...

    Jun 9, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Wake up

    Hello! I really like the imagery and the strong words that you used in your poem, like "dragged" and "turmoil". Your words were interesting and created a strong feeling throughout ...

    Jun 5, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Freckles

    Lileh! Please forgive, I'm so rusty with both poetry and reviewing, but I'll do my very best. I’ve been trying all night to kiss away your freckles D'aww! with every ...

    Jun 5, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: I wander here

    Hey! You get my first review since January, so please bear with me if it isn't too good. I don't like the intro part. A good poem should stand on ...

    Jun 5, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Winter Bloom [edited yet again]

    Hello Meep! Let me start by saying that I thought this was absolutely adorable. It accurately describes the way a young person - especially a boy, I feel - loves ...

    Dec 14, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Sorry

    This isn't exactly a poem. Stringing words together With breaks in between Does not make for a poem. A poem must have rhythm, structure, creative language. Similes, metaphores, imagery. All ...

    Nov 11, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Around the world: America to Poland

    Hi there! So I was attracted to your title because I'm Polish. =] Just because I might not write every word write. The second write should be right. I was ...

    Nov 11, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Monster

    So the others already touched upon the spelling/grammar errors, so I won't bother to reiterate that. Your poem had nice flow and rhythm, and you actually stayed consistant to your ...

    Oct 23, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Poison

    This is actually pretty good. If you hadn't said that you don't write poetry, I would have never guessed. I didn't find anything wrong with your word choice or grammar. ...

    Oct 17, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Instruction Guide to the Crazy

    Hi there. This was cute. ^^ I enjoyed it. Never rhyme rhyme with time, Because it's cliché, Well, that's what I say, And neva rite wit korekt gramer or punctuation, ...

    Oct 1, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: All of Us.

    Hi StreetRat. Your poem was well-written and well-structured. A little too cynical for my taste, but good regardless. It's true, it's honest, and it's thoughtful. Not many poets achieve that, ...

    Jun 5, 2010
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: .

    Hi Rosey! Nitpicks first. I only noticed two small spelling mistakes: No mater how much I used this spell, it still drained me. Matter My master came up to me ...

    May 2, 2010


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