Explosive_Pen

Through every storm and shadow, Through thunder and through rain; Let my heart be all-enduring, Numbed to every pain. Amazing stanza. Nice rhythm and grammar. No mistakes here. Though blades ...

Hello! I shall review your poem. Rhythm ~ Absolutely amazing. Flawless. The flow was so smooth. Usually when reading poetry, my mind stutters trying to find the rhythm, but here, ...

This was a really nice poem. The rhythm was a bit off, but I'll excuse that (hey, it's my fatal flaw too!). The story is interesting; I'd never really thought ...

Wow! This is one of the only short poems that I actually liked. The problem with short poems is that you don't get the same amount of meaning and depth ...

Alrighty, nitpicks: I don't know what to do. All I can think about is you. Over there you used to stand. Holding my hand as tightly as you can. I ...

Oh. My. God. This was hilarious. Absolutely hilarious. You got the characters all topsy-turvey and inside-out. Haha. I can't stop laughing. Oh my Lord, though, I used to love the ...

This is great. Flawless flow and rhythm, and really nice message. Makes me feel happy, so thanks for brightening my day. The rhyme scheme was consistent and you didn't stray ...

This is great! Wonderful alliteration (that always makes me happy, since I can never pull it off). Some rhythm issues, but I'll forgive that. This is all like, dark and ...

Is this a villanelle? I'm not too familiar with those, but regardless, it's wonderful. I'm trying to find something wrong with this, but there isn't anything. The repetition is pulled ...

Hi! Okay, so first off, in one of the beginning paragrapgs, where you say "light of day", the expression is, I believe, time of day. The fifth paragraph is genius. ...

Oh good God. This was really interesting to read, and what I think it means scares me. But then again, many things do. The repetition is good here. You're one ...

Hiya Evi! Wonderful poem. Some rhythm issues, though. And I don't particularly understand your transition from the second to the third stanza. The grass was bowing before you, but now ...

Hi! I loved the idea. It's so unique. I agree about the whole perfection thing. Make him interesting. Give him flaws. And you spelled amber wrong. Just one more thing: ...

Hmm... An elf... That might be from TEW? Or am I being an ego-maniac, assuming Lunette might have been built from Callista's bones? And am I getting metaphor crazy now? ...

Hi! I'm a review this now, 'kay? This was so beautifully written. And I'm listening to Blue October (a band that most people I ask have not heard of), and ...