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Re: Chapter 1
This is very interesting while it follows the basic chosen one route you are left to wonder if this blood "magic" (if there's much a thing for a blood wielder) ...
Aug 20 -
Re: Morning in the City
I like how you captured that glum, monotonous and apathic feeling. When I opened this (due to my great optimism) I was expecting beautiful city streets, the quiet beauty of ...
Aug 5 -
Re: Ode to Routines/Habits
I never do my bed nor change my clothes out of bed, I brush my teeth once a week, I don't always have breakfast nor a shower so what kind ...
Jun 7 -
Re: Fire
I just really want points to make some satire.. so, REVIEW TIME!! It's a poem simply about fire but let's look for hidden meanings (if there are none I'm gonna ...
May 29 -
Re: Lady Liberty
I'm just bored so I'm gonna review this to test my skills (I'm not good on the technical side of poetry) First off... wait (searches meaning of the word freedom) ...
May 28 -
Re: Opaque
Hmm... I guess I try this S'more reviewing method today for fun. Graham Cracker: So, what is the father's name? Daniel? Kind of hard to tell... Anyway, it seems to ...
May 5 -
Re: I Miss The Day
The ending is haunting! This is a beautiful poem that speaks to anyone who has passed that stage of life, it makes you ask about childhood, life what is the ...
May 1 -
Re: Murderous Betrayal
Mostly some grammar gripes I have! Hehe! Overall this is very good, I would like some more details however, what is Sarah wearing? How does the office look like? I ...
Apr 29
