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Hello, today I will talk about grammar and how a sentence(s) made me feel, let's go! I fell Yeah,you heard that right,I fell.From where? Hell.How does a demon fall from ...

Hi, I will mostly speak on grammar and how a sentence from this story feels to me. I feel it's important to know what kind of audience your trying to ...

This chapter has a multiple issues many of which @4evergreen pointed out. First off I don't particularly like the AI poster and while I personally have issues with it but ...

I've decided to work harder on some reviews I feel deeply guilty and was lazy about (including this one!) I will mostly talk about how I feel about the context ...

This is very interesting while it follows the basic chosen one route you are left to wonder if this blood "magic" (if there's much a thing for a blood wielder) ...

I like how you captured that glum, monotonous and apathic feeling. When I opened this (due to my great optimism) I was expecting beautiful city streets, the quiet beauty of ...

I never do my bed nor change my clothes out of bed, I brush my teeth once a week, I don't always have breakfast nor a shower so what kind ...

I've decided to work harder on some reviews I feel deeply guilty and was lazy about (including this one!) I'm not very knowledgeable on the technical side of poems and ...

I'm just bored so I'm gonna review this to test my skills (I'm not good on the technical side of poetry) First off... wait (searches meaning of the word freedom) ...

Hmm... I guess I try this S'more reviewing method today for fun. Graham Cracker: So, what is the father's name? Daniel? Kind of hard to tell... Anyway, it seems to ...

The ending is haunting! This is a beautiful poem that speaks to anyone who has passed that stage of life, it makes you ask about childhood, life what is the ...

Mostly some grammar gripes I have! Hehe! Overall this is very good, I would like some more details however, what is Sarah wearing? How does the office look like? I ...