Eveningstar

Hi there! All I can say about this is that the metaphor use in this poem is absolutely brilliant! Each line is very evocative and paints a picture before the ...

Hi there, and welcome to YWS! I hope you'll like it here. Ok, so I hadn't planned to do anymore reviews today, but your work was very intriguing, and from ...

Hi Rose! I'm here to review your lyrics. This is a very heartrending depiction of what soul-crushing despair must feel like. To be so depressed and hopeless you literally can't ...

Hi Cards! I'm here to review your poem. The imagery of this poem is really very well done! You portray the narrator's emotions, her feelings of sadness, jealousy, helplessness as ...

Hi Shauzer! I'm Eveningstar, and I'm here to review your poem. Firstly, let me divide this poem into its elements. To begin with, I must tell you that your control ...

Wow! A personification of Monday. To start off, I should say that that is a really novel topic, one I would never have come up with myself! So for coming ...

Hi there! I'm Eveningstar and I'm here to review your chapter. The overall concept was interesting, and the ending left me pining for more. I desperately wanted to know what ...

Hi there! This poem is quite amazing, and extremely touching! It was a pleasure to read, though in a heartbreaking kind of way. Now for the review. Firstly let me ...

Ok, first things first. I absolutely loved the subtlety and nuance with which you described the two protagonists of your story. At first we get to see the girl as ...

This is a post apocalyptic, 'Look on my works ye mighty...' kind of declaration of the human race's past achievements, from what I could tell. It paints a vivid picture ...

To say that this is a lovely poem would be an understatement! The imagery in this poem, of the lone wolf walking along the deserted forest path, taking comfort in ...

The descriptions of the poet's emotions are quite breathtaking! The heat and passion evident throughout the poem, the atmosphere of almost desperate longing, are quite remarkable indeed! The only thin

The best thing about this poem is the lovely imagery of peace and tranquility. The words are well chosen and the poem flows quite smoothly, painting a soothing picture of ...