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Re: Drag Me To Hell
Hello, Miley, I am here to review this work. I am going to give my honest opinion on this, so I am sorry if I end up offending you. Now, ...
Sep 2, 2014 -
Re: If Smiles Could Talk - chapter 1
Hello, Snowy Birdy! Raven here to represent Reviewing Machine in this review! I am going to start off by saying that I like the format that was used. Instead of ...
Aug 31, 2014 -
Re: Pokemon Ultimate Evolution Season Two: Episode 21, Kept At Bay
Hello, dark! Raven here for a review! Now, I have no read the previous chapters, so I apologize if this review is not the best. This is going to be ...
Aug 31, 2014 -
Re: Till death do us part: Chapter 1 or Prologue?
Hey, myjaspercat! Raven here for a quick review! Now, I see in the title that you are confused whether this is chapter one or a prologue. So, I would like ...
Aug 31, 2014 -
Re: Keeping it real-Chapter 1
Hello, EPICnumber1! First of all, epic user name. ;) Now, I have not read the... Divergent series. So, I apologize if one, I got the name of the series wrong, ...
Aug 31, 2014 -
Re: T-Minus 134 Days
Hey, thetejmahal! Raven here for a review! The first two sentences really drew me in. They both sparked some questions within the reader. Making us wonder why Alex was on ...
Aug 28, 2014 -
Re: The Adventures of Mary Gibbs Ch2
Hello! Raven here to review as requested! I'm not that sure how to go about reviewing this. As I understand, this is supposed to be a chapter that sparks something ...
Aug 28, 2014 -
Re: Affinity 3.4 Girl
Hello, Timmy! Raven here for a review! Now, I have read this over several times and I must say I enjoyed this chapter. The descriptions are flawless in my opinion ...
Aug 28, 2014 -
Re: Face the Dragon First Part (Side note--the dragon doesn't appear yet.)
Hello! Raven here to give her 75th review! I hope to make this my longest! The first paragraph of this chapter seems like a major information dump. Like several other ...
Aug 26, 2014 -
Re: Dead Letters - Chapter 1
Hello! Raven here for a review on this lovely beginning of the novel! Now, I would say welcome to YWS, but it seems that you have been here for a ...
Aug 26, 2014 -
Re: Laughter of a ghost
Hello! Raven here to do a quick review! Now, I am not one to review poetry, but I am here to give my best shot! I like the poem you ...
Aug 26, 2014 -
Re: The Battle Chapter 7
Hi! Raven is here for a review on this delightful book you have written! I must say, I feel bad for Stacy. With the main love interest not talking to ...
Aug 24, 2014 -
Re: Life As A Criminal~ Parts 7/8~ Hard as Stone- I Thought We Were Friends...
Hey! Raven here for another review! I apologize if I make any mistakes, I am on my phone and my fingers are very clumsy. I am liking where the story ...
Aug 23, 2014 -
Re: Life As A Criminal ~Chapter One~ -Part 1/2:Savvanah Tomas- When It All Goes Down-
Hey! Raven here for the first of several reviews on your series! Woah, that's a lot of information in just one paragraph. We know a lot about, ehm, Alexis/Savvy from ...
Aug 20, 2014 -
Re: Dawn of the Daughter of God-Chapter Five
Hi, sister! I have gone through and read the previous chapters, and I must say I love them! I am loving the concept of Joan of Arc being sent by ...
Aug 19, 2014