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Re: Affinity 2.2 Boy
Guten tag, Timmy! I am really, really sorry for not being able to not review. I got reviews block on another work and I couldn't review this until I did ...
Oct 9, 2014 -
Re: Flashbacks-chapter 2
Bonjour, Cass! Raven here to give you a review! :D I'm sorry if I seem harsh at all, that is not my intention. "I need to think this through" I ...
Oct 9, 2014 -
Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 7
Salutations, Ella! 'tis I Raven here for a... review. Oh, wow. It's been a while, hasn't it? I'm sorry, I've had reviewers block. I'm still going to try and do ...
Oct 7, 2014 -
Re: Memories of a "Brighter" Past
Hello, Chaotic! I am sorry if at any point in this review I come off as harsh, that is not my intention. I only want to further your writing abilities! ...
Oct 6, 2014 -
Re: Prologue
Howdy, Superminer! 'tis I, Raven, here for a review on your novel! Before I begin... I would like to say that I am sorry if I appear harsh in anyway. ...
Oct 3, 2014 -
Re: Escaping The Kidnapper- Chapter 1
Hello, Kim! Raven here to give you a quick review! I am a bit tired so I am sorry if this review seems harsh. First sentences are supposed to draw ...
Sep 30, 2014 -
Re: Affinity 2.1 Boy
Hey, Timmy! Raven here for another review! I will try and review these chapters every other day, so please bear with me. :D Um, I'm not really sure how to ...
Sep 30, 2014 -
Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 6
Hello, Noelle! Raven here for another review! See, I can review every two days! Now, let me feed your novel a like and I can continue on with this! (Also, ...
Sep 29, 2014 -
Re: The Story fo Nothing doesn't make sense
Hello, darling little brother of mine. I, Raven, your awesome sister and I'm here to review! I understand this is your first work on here, so I shall be very ...
Sep 29, 2014 -
Re: The Tale of a Charmander (A Pokemon Story) Chapter 1; The Mysterious Charmander and the Hidden Town
Hello, Charizard! Raven here to give a review! Now, I do not watch that much Pokemon or play the card games, so I am sorry if I sound ignorant. :D ...
Sep 28, 2014 -
Re: Thirty Days Through the Forest. Part Four.
Hello, Thundah! Raven here for a quick review! I have not read any of the other chapters, so I am sorry if my review appears ignorant of the plot. Oh, ...
Sep 28, 2014 -
Re: The Day Will Come
Hello, Azalas! Raven here for a review! I understand that this is a WIP (as it said in the description), however, I am here to kick it out of the ...
Sep 28, 2014 -
Re: Gila monsters part 1
Hello, lostdelacreme! Raven here to give you a review! Now, before I begin... I must say... WELCOME TO YWS! I hope you enjoy your time here and have long happy ...
Sep 28, 2014 -
Re: Affinity 1.0 Boy
Hello, Timmy (and Deanie. Wait, Deanie, you're writing this too?)! Your novels parent here after a long, long, long while of promising to review... then not reviewing! However, never fear, ...
Sep 28, 2014 -
Re: The Adventures of Mary Gibbs Ch 1
Hello! Your novels parent here for a review! I am sorry if this seems a little harsh! I just try and help you improve in writing! Now, I have not ...
Sep 27, 2014