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First Impression: Well...this was quite a premise here...also a very intriguing POV you've chosen for the prologue as from what I assume here, this appears to be someone that's right in the inner circle of the person that's attempting to take over the world and hence is potentially the "bad guy". Its an interesting take here at any rate.
Anyway let's get right to it,
When we were kids, we were told that anything was possible. Of course, we didn’t believe it. We also joked about world domination, thinking we were being funny. Of course, we didn’t actually think it was possible.
For years, we didn’t know how wrong we were.
Well...that's already off to a pretty exciting start there...I do love the way it began there...just casually building up to literal world domination right in the first paragraph certainly peaks your interest as far as a story is concerned. I am loving this start here.
It all started when codename Ragnorak ran for president. No one thought he would win; again he did this as a joke. But once he started gaining popularity and support from people in our area, then our region; he realized he may actually be able to do it. He eventually gained the support of the whole country and won the election.
Hmm...well that codename is a very interesting one...and if that person actually used that name to run for president...well they're not exactly hiding what they plan to do there...but well...it is an interesting tale there, someone that's seemingly joking about actually gaining support and winning...certainly seems like he would be quite an interesting character if he doesn't blow up the whole that is...that would probably make him less likeable.
In the first few months of his presidency he enlisted a friend from his teen years, codename Anubis, to head the new science division he opened in the Capitol. Anubis, being a laser fusion scientist and one of the top scientists in the country, if not the world, was an obvious choice for the head of the division. Many of Ragnorak’s advisors agreed with his decision. They all believed Anubis would be able to create many new technologies, which would propel the country to the forefront of the scientific revolution.
Okay...as far as I know...laser fusion is some form of advanced nuclear fusion technique...if I remember correctly so that surprisingly manages to check out at least as far as producing energy goes there...although not entirely sure how that's going to be leading a scientific revolution just by itself especially if in this world the laser fusion thing is a very common thing with many scientific minds...cause you mention he is only one of many top scientists. BUt well...a science division sounds like a fun introduction here, let's see where this is headed.
Lastly Ragnorak recruited me, codename Cerberus. Being an alumnus from the top of my class at West Point, and a friend from his teenage years, I was his first choice to lead his Special Operations unit.
Oooh...well...this is an interesting detail to see that this whole thing is from the perspective of someone that actually works for the guy...I wonder if that will end up putting a tiny bit of a bias on things too...and if you plan on balancing that out with other POV's. Well...this certainly makes things more interesting here.
Years passed with relative peace with other countries and prosperity within the country, but it all changed when Ragnorak set his plan into motion. He started by slowly converting the U.S. government from democracy to despotism. It wasn’t full on despotism though, he still kept advisors, Anubis and I, and others to help him lead. He then began creating an army to increase his power and quell any rebellions. Eventually, he began invading other countries and over time, he gained control of North and Central America.
Okay...there we go...he's just gonna start taking over the world then...and surprisingly it looks like this guy is actually kind of on board with that whole plan or at least I don't sense any sort of clear bad opinion on this action...well at any rate, this is taking a lovely turn here and it seems quite fitting here for a prologue.
A rebel group began to emerge in the Andes Mountains, headed by a man who called himself Antartó̱n. The rebels, self-proclaimed Propýrgio, had begun recruiting mercenaries and consulting with the countries that opposed us; who eventually, united under Antartó̱n, merged into one: Celerius.
It seems as though Ragnorak’s plan may not go as smoothly as we had expected.
Okay...well its clear by this point this dude one hundred percent Team Ragnorak...which should be interesting going forward...but well it appears much like you'd see in most world domination attempts, we have ourselves some rebels...and they appear to be messing with this plan of world domination quite successfully which is certainly good to see....and I wonder what the POV of the story might be like...cause well...we've certainly got a lovely premise set up here in this prologue.
Aaaaand that's it for this one.
Overall: Overall, got a pretty neat premise here, and it looks like there's going to be quite a lot happening in the world here, and there certainly appears to be a good bit of worldbuilding done here too. It does seem like the type of story that I would read.
As always remember to take what you think was helpful and forget the rest.
Stay Safe
Harry
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