EscapeToNeverland

Hey Veer! It's me T.J here to review. Anyway, as I said before this is beautiful. I dont like goodbyes, they make me sad, something about them, maybe the fact ...

Hey! It's Neverland here to review! Okay to start off I like the idea of this, I also like how you kept it short. Though I will say one thing: ...

Hey it's Neverland here to review!! First off the piece was good, I think keeping it short was good, having to much might have gotten confusing. I really like how ...

Hey it's Neverland here to review this piece!! I really liked the way you wrote a piece for your friend when they're going through a tough time. It's such a ...

Hey Neverland here to review this piece!!! I really like it. You kept it simple, short. But yet despite that it was a real nice read that made sense, well ...

Hey it's Neverland here to review again! I really like rain so I enjoyed this poem alot!!!! I like the way you wrote this, how you used heaps of metaphors! ...

Hey it's Neverland here!!! Okay I'd just like to start off by saying I really like the title and poem!!! I liked the way you took such a simple concept ...

I'm finally here to review!!! I'm so sorry it took this long!! But I'm here at last!!! Okay so I really like how you kept it short, I think it ...

Now like I just pointed out I love this!!! Not because of the poem itself (which I do even though it's 2 lines) but because it's 2 lines and yet ...

Okay its Neverland here to review your lovely song!!! I was absolutely amazed when I read this. I was like; I LOVE IT!!! My mum was cooking dinner and she ...

Hey there! I see your new to the site, you actually joined the day before my birthday! Nice job. I mean your amazing piece when I say that. Though quick ...

Hey Shadow!! Now I'm not going to review this. It's to hard, so it has nothing to do with me being lazy. I cant really find anythign big that needs ...

Review for ‘Are you real?’ Okay so hey Dragon!! Oh and I'm reviewing this cause I want to, not cause I feel obliged. So that means this is a real ...

Hey Yubbies it's Neverland here to review your piece. You wrote this beautifully, I dont think I can find any real faults with it. I think you captured the way ...

Hey it's Neverland here to review your beautiful piece. I loved reading this piece, everything about it. From the personification, good job with that by the way, the verbs, the ...