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Re: Faith - Chapter Five
Hey Willa!! Here is Eros to review your beautiful work!! I read the previous chapters on Faith. They were really great and they contained a real and hidden, unique beauty. ...
Aug 17, 2015 -
Re: Stars: The Forgotten
Hello willa! Here comes Eros to write a review on your beautiful story "Stars: The forgotten". The story is full of mysterious suspence. It is really wonderful. The story amazes ...
Jul 19, 2015 -
Re: All Is Fair In Love And War
Hello Hamsa!! Here comes Eros to write a review on your beautiful script "All is fair in love and war". A small mistake, "JAMIL : (cutting in) But what? I ...
Jul 19, 2015 -
Re: Are you there?
Hello 4EverApart!! Here comes Eros to write a review on your first and beautiful lyrical stuff. I was really amazed by your writing. 'Was'? I should rather say I AM ...
Jul 19, 2015 -
Re: Meditation
Hello Morrigan!! Here comes Eros to write a reviw on your beautiful and romantic poem which has got a wonderful spiritual touch. I loved the poem very much. Your style ...
Jul 19, 2015 -
Re: Being A Bookworm
Hello MadedoOtter!! Here comes Eros to write a review on your beautiful essay on Bookworms! I loved the essay. It is based on a very unique topic--Bookworms. All that you ...
Jul 19, 2015 -
Re: Making The Most of Teenage
Hey MadedoOtter!! This is Eros here to review your beautiful essay!! I loved reading the essay on teenagers. You have summed up all your views so beautifully in very little ...
Jul 18, 2015 -
Re: Wings stroke her
Heya Lau!! This is Eros here! Ohh!! This was a really emotional poem. The girl in the poem was suffering from a deadly disease -- Cancer and then she ultimately ...
Jul 5, 2015 -
Re: A sad song plays on my friend's guitar
Heya! Silentbagpipe!! This is Eros here!! I read your poem " A sad song plays on my friend's guitar". It has a good rhyming scheme. The rhyming scheme is aabbcc... ...
Jun 29, 2015 -
Re: nothing
Heya Buckis! This is Eros here! I think that your poem is not in a format of a poem. Your poem has long sentences that goes till the edge of ...
Jun 28, 2015 -
Re: Sir Swagalot
Heya Kat!! This is Eros here!! This is a really wonderful poem. It is a cute and a sweet poem. You have expressed the feelings in a really sweet way. ...
Jun 6, 2015 -
Re: Mathematical Mumbo-Jumbo
Heya lavvie!! This is Eros here to write a review!! First of all the poem has a small mistake in it: "She wrote this In Math class, miss. While trying ...
May 31, 2015 -
Re: Nostalgia
Heya Lava!!! This is Eros here to review your work!! This poem " Nostalgia" is really a beautiful poem. The tyndall effect and creaking effect is described with a sweet ...
May 31, 2015 -
Re: Flower
Hi dear IncohesiveScribbles!!! This is Eros here to review your work!! I read your fantastic poem " Flower". It expesses the beauty in a very sweet way.The singinging of the ...
May 31, 2015 -
Re: Human
Heya Clippedwings!! This is Eros here to review your work!! I read your poem "Human". It is a nic poem explaining the condition of Humans. A girl asks you a ...
May 31, 2015
